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Thoughts In My Mind
I registered here some days ago, with the intention of improving my knowledge of the English language, and to practice speaking primarily, which I hardly ever get a chance to do.
I don't have any scholastic experience with English, all that I know I have learned by myself, through my work.
I ask myself, what will it be like to talk with a stranger, what should I say, how should I say it?
I think that to be spontaneous,would be the right thing, maybe there will be few laughs at the beginning, but I will let myself be lead by those who has more experience than me.
This was a good start Cristian, I did make a few minor corrections, but overall I think you did a nice job! If you have any questions, please let me know. If you would like me to help you practice and improve your English, I'd be happy to help you do that!
thoughts in mind...
I registered here some days ago with the intention to improve my knowledge of the English language and to practice primarily in speech, which I hardly ever chance to do.I don't have any scholastic experience on English. All that I know I have learned by myself, through my work.
I ask myself how will be to talk with a stranger... what to say... how to say it...
I think that to be spontanous will be the right thing... maybe there will be few laugh at the beginning, but I let myself to be lead by who has more experience than me
Hello, Cristian! You are doing very well for having only learned from books! Well done! A few corrections with explanations:
"I hardly ever have a chance to...." Have is the verb here, and its necessary.
"How it will be to talk...." It is a subject pronoun here. Again, it is necessary.
"That being spontaneous will be the right thing..." It would be a little cleaner to say "I think spontaneity will be the right thing... " Spontaneity is the noun form of spontaneous. If you choose spontaneous, its an adjective so it needs something to modify. In my first correction I gave you "being" which is a verb working as a noun (a gerund). Being how? Being spontaneous.
"A few laughs." Laughs is plural because a few means more than one.
"I will let myself be led by someone who has..." I put "will" in there so that you are in the future tense, I will let myself. I will be led. That needs to be in agreement. "Who" needs to refer back to someone.... or you could use the more general "whomever."
Great work. If you find yourself looking for a community tutor, I'd be glad to work with you. You are building a very good foundation!
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