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Could anybody correct it for me? I wake up at five o'clock today, then I had a bath. I would say that I wouldn't like to go out. To work is bad everytime. The traffic is very hard, the bus are old and the people are complicated. I rather stay home. Always. But I need to work for to pay my bills, unfortunately. To live is expensive! For hang out, I like to go to the pub to drink beer. I love beer. And I like to watching tv too. Now, olympics games are the better attraction of TV in Brazil. Sorry. I know that my English is bad yet, but I need to try... Thanks!

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Could anybody correct it for me?

I wake woke up at five o'clock today, then I had a bath. I would say that I wouldn  didn't like to go  going out. Working all the time is bad every time. The traffic is very heavy hard, the buses are old and the people are complicated difficult. I would rather stay home. Always. But I need to work for to pay my bills, unfortunately. To live is expensive! For Tor hang out, I like to go to the pub to drink beer. I love beer. And I like to watching tv too. Now, the olympics games are the better  best attraction of on TV in Brazil.

Sorry. I know that my English is still bad yet, but I need to try...

Thanks!



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Could anybody correct it for me?

I woke up at five o'clock today, and then I had a bath. I can say that I hate to go to work. To go to work is tedious -- everyday working day. The traffic is very hard, the bus are old, and the people are bothersome. I rather stay at home --- always. But I need to work for in order to pay for my bills, unfortunately. To survive is expensive! To hang out, I like to go to a pub and drink beer. I love beer. And I like to watch TV too. Right now, the Olympics games are the better attractions on TV in Brazil.

Sorry, I know that my English is still bad, so I need to study harder...

Not really that bad : I can understand every of your sentences )

Thanks!

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