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Beethoven Beethoven was a man depressive, antisocial, rough. He had problems for connect with the people through the interaction daily achieve the heart the of all the world with his music. Beethoven a musician who never forget us, his music was able to rise because he knew what was the hill. The deafness, the abuses and dislike, but the music continue sounded in his head. Beethoven "The sound and the fury". Born in Alemania in a family of musicians. The grandfather the of great musician who shared his name he was the director the of palace on bonn he tried pass his talent to his child johan, but he result a mediocre musician, johan married and had three children and the child biggest showed interest for the music to very early age and his father promised teach piano the lessons were cruel. he father wanted converted in other Mozart, Beethoven was solitary, moody not spoke with nobody to the 7 years age gave his first concert in public. Beethoven left the school at 10 years age for full devoted to the music. when he was a teenager went to vienna He wanted to meet to reigning god Mozart, at 16 years age played to Mozart and Mozart was amazed wiht his music, Beethoven wish learn together to him but that would be the last time that he saw him. the mother of Beethoven died and he returned home to bonn, he was torn for the lost of the woman who loved him too. Beethoven had care of his family because his father ended sunk into the alcohol. Beethoven started work in the bonn palace but he should learn to play violin himself because it was the single instruments available. one day someone say him "can you rewrite the notes because it was imposible of play", beethoven reply him "believe you care me your little violin when the musa visit me?" that was the character of Beethoven with a high ego. In 1792 went to Viennna for earn to the nobles a month after died his father but beethoven didn´t want back to bonn for to go to funeral the of who cause him so damage. He played the piano as nobody, the women until swoon, he cause that his competitors left ran when make extemporize competences. before of the 30 years age started hear a buzz in his ear this rise his fury with violent mood swings but he didn't say nobody about his problem and the problem grow with the time. he didn't want tease of him and pretend hear. he wented to live a villa outside Vienna waiting get well on a ambient most quiet... still I am translate this is for a class in next moday

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I write know it and I search the words unkown but I know I have mistakes in the grammar :(
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Hi Milene, there is a lot of very advanced vocabulary in this article, well done, but many grammar errors. By which process did you translate it?

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