impacts on my life(pie charts)
There are many things that have influenced my life.as shown in my pie chart, my family have had the most important influence on me. I have learned never give up from them. When I meet failure, I will make up my determination to get over it.
My friends also have an impact on my life. They are so patient to me, helping me and solving many problems for me. Some cooperation also make we become more united, more profound feelings.
You can see that I’ve had 20 percent ‘experiences’ included in my chart. This is because some of the experiences made me know the true meaning of life. For example, when I took part in a charity activity, I can see some people living in hardship which makes me value my life and how hard I have to work to get there.
I think media also have impacted my life. When I see some hot current affairs, I can know more about today’s life and won’t make me fall behind the trend of the times .
All of this things have made me who I am today.
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impacts on my life(pie charts)
There are many things and people that have influenced my life and I have outlined these in my pie chart. As you can see, my family has been the most influential of all. They have taught me to never give up, to pick myself up and to try, try again. Indeed, whenever I have been unsuccessful at something, I simply muster the determination they have instilled in me, overcome any feelings of disappointment I may have and simply go and try again.
My friends have also had a very important influence on my life and how I see myself. They are so patient with me and they help me to solve many problems and to feel good about myself. This has fostered some very positive feelings between us and has created a very strong bond.
You can see that I’ve had 20 percent ‘experiences’ included in my chart. ( don't understand this phrase) This is because some of the experiences made led me to understand the true meaning of many aspects of life. For example, when I took part in a charity activity, I saw just how many people were living in hardship and this made me really appreciate my life and the hard work that has gone in to getting there.
I think media also have impacted my life. For instance, when I watch some important current affairs issues, I get to know more about today’s life and can form an overall picture of what is going on in the community at large - that way I won’t fall behind with what's happening around me .
All of this things have made me who I am today.
P.S. it is probably not a good idea to collocate the adjective "hot" with current affairs...hot is usually associated with "sex" or "sex scandal" type stuff. .......
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