About myself

Hello All!  I'm 20 years old.  I'm from Tchaikovsky.  It is a small and beautiful town.  I want to study English, because I plan on traveling in English speaking countries.

Hello All! I'm 20.  I'm from the small and beautiful town of Tchaikovsky.  I want to study English, because I will be traveling to different  countries in the future.       

*Notes*

20/twenty: Think counting as in 1 apple, 2 apple, 5 cars,

20th/twentieth: Think position as in 1st place, 2nd place, 20th place.  Think location as in 20th street, 13th street.  Think time as in 20th century.

Will be traveling= future continuous tense

English speaking:  The use of "English speaking"  prevents the reader from thinking you are traveling to a Spanish speaking country for example.  I suggested it for accuracy.  The meaning will likely be understood without it however. 

Use of other: The use of "other" can be tricky.  In this case, the reader needs to know where you currently are.  A reader might guess that you are currently in Tchaikovsky, but they won't be sure unless you explicitly tell them. You are from Tchaikovsky but you may be in Africa at the moment.    Example:  I am in Tchaikovsky, but I plan on traveling to other countries.  In the example sentence you know I am currently in Tchaikovsky without guessing. "Other" usually assumes that the listener has previous knowledge of the person or thing you are talking about. If the listener does not know or is unsure, then a word like "different" might be more appropriate.  Example: I want to travel to different countries.  "Different"  does not require previous knowledge. It emphasizes distinctness/separateness. 

About myself

About myself

Hello everyone,

I'm 20 years old. I'm from a small and beautiful town called Tchaikovsky. I want to study English, because I plan on traveling to other countries in the future.

Good job! Greetings from the USA :-)

About myself