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My Hobbies I have a number of things I like to do in my free time. They are my hobbies. The hobby I like most is playing football. At the weekend I usually play football with my team of indoor football. In the summer time, I play a lot of football tournaments in differents towns. My brother plays football with me in a team of Pinto on weekdays. I usually like to go to running once or twice a week. if it's a sunny day, I like to ride a bike or skates. I sometimes go to skating in Madrid Río. It's a place where there are people doing sport. At homeI play the guitar when I'm bored. I begin to learn to play the guitar. I have an old classical guitar. Also I usually read a book in every night before bed. My last book read was "the Adventures Sherlock Holmes" in English. Another hobby that I spend time is looking after my tongue of tiger plant. This plant is very good to clean the air.

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My Hobbies

I have a number of things I like to do in my free time. They are my hobbies.

The hobby I like most is playing football. At the weekend I usually play football with my team of indoor football. In the summer time, I take part in a lot of football tournaments in differents towns. My brother plays football with me in a team of Pinto on weekdays.

I usually like to go to running once or twice a week.

if it's a sunny day, I like to ride a bike or skate. I sometimes go to skating in Madrid Río. It's a place where there are people playing sports.

At home, I play the guitar when I'm bored. I begin learning to play the guitar. I have an old classical guitar.

Also, I usually read a book in every night before bed. The last book I read was "the Adventures Sherlock Holmes" in English.

Another hobby that I spend time is looking after my tiger tongue plant. This plant is very good to clean the air.
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My Hobbies

I have a number of things that I like to do in my free time.( formal style) They are my hobbies.

The hobby I like the most is playing football. During the weekend, I usually play football with my indoor football team. In the summer time, I play in a lot of football tournaments held in different towns. My brother plays football (together) with me for a team in Pinto on weekdays.

I usually also like to go to running once or twice a week.( to show another hobby of yours)

If it's a sunny day, I may also like to ride my bike or skateboard/roller skates ( another 2 hobbies)

Sometimes I go to skating in Madrid Río. It's a place where there are many people playing this sport.

At home,  I play the guitar when I'm bored. I am just beginning to learn to play the guitar. I have an old classical guitar.

Also, I usually read a book in every night before bed. The last book I read was "The Adventures Sherlock Holmes", written in English.

Another hobby that I spend time on is looking after my tiger plant. This plant is very beneficial, for it improves air quality.

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Nearly perfect except some tiny mistakes: "I usually like to go running" in the third paragraph, "I like to ride a bike or skate" "I sometimes go skating" "doing sports" in the fourth paragraph, " read a book every night before bed*" "My last book I read*" in the sixth paragraph, "another hobby that i spend time on is*" in the seventh paragraph. And by the way, is what you mean by "tongue of tiger plant" a plant called "Epipoguim roseum"?
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My Hobbies

I have a number of things I like to do in my free time. These are my hobbies:

The hobby I like most is playing football. On the weekend I usually play football with my indoor football team. In the summer time I play in a lot of football tournaments in differents towns. My brother plays football with me on a team of Pinto on the weekdays.

I also enjoy running once or twice a week.

If it's a sunny day I like to ride a bike or skate. I sometimes go skating in Madrid Río. It's a place where there are many people doing sports.

At home I play the guitar when I'm bored. I've began learning how to play the guitar. I have a old classical guitar.

Also, I usually read a book every night before bed. My last book that I read was "The Adventures of Sherlock Holmes" in English.

Another hobby that I spend time is looking after my tongue of tiger plant. This plant is very good to clean the air.
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Very good Rubén! It's good you keep busy and also healthy, it's important. Do you use a translator to write this notebook? You write perfectly.

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