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1 The Students' canteen of college in Japan is too bloody crap compared with in China，it only let you eat starch but not protein
2 I can't run any more, my feet are killing me
3 When I saw a pretty girl dating with a guy much worse than me，my philosophy of life collapsed
4 The college background only for sports specialized students .
5 The rates of winning a prize in a loterry is much lower than getting a traffic accident in fact.
6 Even the poor men in China can eat fruits everyday，but only rich men in Japan can afford that，because the prices of them are sky high here
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Sentences-making ：D
1 The Students' college canteens of college in Japan is too bloody crap compared with to compare to those in China，they only let you eat starches but not proteins.2 I can't run any more, my feet are killing me.
3 When I saw a pretty girl dating with a guy much worse than me，my philosophy of life collapsed. (I am not sure about this sentence.)
4 The college playground is only made for sports specialized students .
5 The chances of winning a prize in a lottery are much lower than getting into a traffic accident in fact.
6 Even the poor men in China can eat fruits everyday，but only rich men in Japan can afford that，because the prices of them are sky high here./ Despite being poor, Chinese can eat fruits everyday. On the contrary, normal Japanese cannot afford them because of the sky-high prices.
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Sentences-making ：D
1 The Students' canteen of college in Japan is too bloody crap compared with in China，it only let you eat starch but not proteinThe student canteen at my college in Japan is bloody crap compared with what I experiences in China. In Japan, you are only offered starches, and not enough protein.
2 I can't run any more, my feet are killing me
I can't run any longer, my feet are killing me.
3 When I saw a pretty girl dating with a guy much worse than me，my philosophy of life collapsed
When I saw a pretty girl dating this loser guy, my hopes collapsed.
4 The college background only for sports specialized students .
The college athletic yard is only for the use of students who specialize in sports-related majors.
5 The rates of winning a prize in a loterry is much lower than getting a traffic accident in fact.
The chance of winning a prize in a lottery is much lower than the risk of getting in a traffic accident.
6 Even the poor men in China can eat fruits everyday，but only rich men in Japan can afford that，because the prices of them are sky high here
Even poor men in China can eat fruit everyday, but in Japan only rich men can afford to eat fruit. The prices of fruit in Japan are sky high!
Great work!!! PS--I also lived in Japan and can commiserate regarding the cost of fruit! :)
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