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Diary I attended a yoga class in the evening today. I take this yoga class every Tuesday. This class is held at a temple, which makes me calm and relaxed every time. However, I got tired today as the class was so aggressive, which is really rare! I may suffer from muscular pain in my whole body tomorrow. I also like this hard class though! I want to be able to do head stand pose one day!

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Diary

I attended a yoga class in the evening today. I take this yoga class every Tuesday.
This class is held at a temple, which makes me calm and relaxed every time. However, I got tired today since the class was so aggressive, which is really rare! I may suffer from muscular pain in my whole body tomorrow. I also like this hard class, though! I want to be able to do the head stand pose one day!
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Diary

I attended a yoga class in the this evening today. I take this yoga class every Tuesday.
This class is held at a temple, which makes me calm and relaxed every time. However, today* I got tired today as the class was so aggressive, which is really rare! I may suffer from muscular pain in my whole body tomorrow.** I also like this hard class though! I want to be able to do a head stand pose one day!***

* or "tonight" or "this evening."

** This sentence is a little clinical. (タカヨさんの仕事は、露出しました!) A more natural sentence would be, "My whole body may be sore tomorrow."

*** !!!

This is good! No grammar mistakes. My suggestions are just style choices. Doing yoga in a temple sounds pretty amazing!

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