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What the fortune teller said the other day and an impressive story that I read on the internet
Again,I tried to translate what I read on the Internet. Any collections -->corrections are welcomed.I have a friend who is doing a self-employed business and likes playing computer games. When I see-->saw him having-->holding (or with) the controller, I would often told him like a joke that “you should recognize your carrier -->take your career more seriously.” Even though i was just kidding, he always returned-->responded like “I’m on it! I’m planning!” for a joke. We, everybody, need the time when our minds can be freed from the stressful routines of works. Today, I recommend that you have a margin -->take some time to relax for play. Now that there is a opportunity for you to achieve what you have dreamed of.
A man who lives in New Zealand is a believer of Siku Sikh and he can never put -->take off his turban in front of people for a religious reasons. However, he wore took off his turban and used it to stop the blooding bleeding of a child who got in a traffic accident even though it meant he broke the convention.
Very good! You picked interesting stories.
"Take something seriously" is a good phrase. It means "to be serious about something" or "to have a serious attitude about something."
"Have a margin for play" would make sense if you said "have a margin of time for play" but it seems a bit unnatural. "Take some time to relax" is more natural, I think.
Good luck with English! You're doing great! Your articles (the, a) in particular were very well used.
What the fortune teller said the other day and an impressive story that i I read on the internet
Again, i I've tried to translate what i I read on the Internet. Any collections corrections are welcomed.I have a friend who is doing a self-employed owns his own* business and likes playing computer games. When I see him having holding the controller**, I would often told him like a joke that tease him, “you should recognize take your carrier career more seriously.” Even though i was I'm just kidding, he always returned like responds, “I’m on it! I’m planning!” for a joke. We, everybody, needs the time when our minds can be freed from the stressful of routine works. Today, I recommend that you have give yourself a margin for play. Now that there is an opportunity for you to achieve what you have dreamed of.
A man who lives in New Zealand is a believer of Siku member of the Sikh religion, and he can never put take off his turban in front of people for a religious reason. However, he wore took off his turban and used it to stop the blooding of a child who got had been in a traffic accident even though it meant he had broken the convention.
* I changed it to "who owns his own business," but you could also say, "who is self employed and likes . . . "
** This is the game controller, right?
Good story, and a nice message!
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