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What the fortune teller said the other day and impressive story that i read on the internet Again, i tried to translate what i read on the Internet. Any collections are welcomed. I have a friend who is doing a self-employed business and like playing computer games. When I see him having the controller, I would often told him like a joke that “you should recognize your carrier more seriously.” Even though i was just kidding, he always returned like “I’m on it! I’m planning!” for a joke. We, everybody, need the time when our mind be freed from the stressful routine works. Today, I recommend that you have a margin for play. Now that there is a opportunity for you to achieve what you have dreamed of. A man who lives in New Zealand is a believer of Siku and he can never put off his turban in front of people for a religious reason. However, he wore off his turban and used it to stop the blooding of a child who got in a traffic accident even though it meant he broke the convention.

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What the fortune teller said the other day and an  impressive story that I read on the internet

Again,I tried to translate what I read on the Internet. Any collections -->corrections are welcomed.

I have a friend who is doing a self-employed business and likes playing computer games. When I see-->saw him having-->holding (or with) the controller, I would often told him like a joke that “you should recognize your carrier -->take your career more seriously.” Even though i was just kidding, he always returned-->responded  like “I’m on it! I’m planning!” for a joke. We, everybody, need the time when our minds can be freed from the stressful routines of works. Today, I recommend that you have a margin -->take some time to relax for play. Now that there is a opportunity for you to achieve what you have dreamed of.

A man who lives in New Zealand is a believer of Siku  Sikh and he can never put -->take off his turban in front of people for a religious reasons. However, he wore took off his turban and used it to stop the blooding bleeding of a child who got in a traffic accident even though it meant he broke the convention.


Very good! You picked interesting stories.

"Take something seriously" is a good phrase. It means "to be serious about something" or "to have a serious attitude about something."

"Have a margin for play" would make sense if you said "have a margin of time for play" but it seems a bit unnatural. "Take some time to relax" is more natural, I think.

Good luck with English! You're doing great! Your articles (the, a) in particular were very well used.

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What the fortune teller said the other day and an impressive story that i I read on the internet

Again, i I've tried to translate what i I read on the Internet. Any collections corrections are welcomed.

I have a friend who is doing a self-employed owns his own* business and likes playing computer games. When I see him having holding the controller**, I would often told him like a joke that tease him, “you should recognize take your carrier career more seriously.” Even though i was I'm just kidding, he always returned like responds, “I’m on it! I’m planning!” for a joke. We, everybody, needs the time when our minds can be freed from the stressful of routine works. Today, I recommend that you have give yourself a margin for play. Now that there is an opportunity for you to achieve what you have dreamed of.

A man who lives in New Zealand is a believer of Siku member of the Sikh religion, and he can never put take off his turban in front of people for a religious reason. However, he wore took off his turban and used it to stop the blooding of a child who got had been in a traffic accident even though it meant he had broken the convention.


* I changed it to "who owns his own business," but you could also say, "who is self employed and likes . . . " 

** This is the game controller, right?

Good story, and a nice message!

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