Friday, July 22, 2016
Today I went swimming with my friends, I haven't swum in a long time so I was very excited about it. The pool is approximately 15-20 minutes ride from my home. We arrived around 4:30 PM then we parked our scooters and paid the entrance fee. All of a sudden all the excitement was gone when I had a quick glance to the swimming pool. What turned me off was the pool was not as clean as usual and, moreover, it cost a pretty penny to enter the pool. The water was so dirty I could barely see through it. Although disappointed, I swam for an hour and enjoyed it.
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Friday, July 22, 2016
Today I went swimming with my friends, I hadn't (pluperfect) swum in a long time so I was very excited about it. The pool is approximately a 15-20 minutes ride from my home. We arrived around 4:30 PM then we parked our scooters and paid the entrance fee. All of a sudden, all the excitement was gone when I had a quick glance at the swimming pool. What turned me off was the pool because it was not as clean as usual and, moreover, it cost a pretty penny to enter the pool. The water was so dirty I could barely see through it. Although disappointed, I swam for an hour and enjoyed it.--
Very well-written! I don't know how you can swim in dirty water for an hour though :P
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