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Diary of my life in Canada July 20
Nowadays, I feel I'm getting used to speak English more fluently!I'm really happy! Thanks to everyone who corrected my notebook!
But I still have some problems.
First, I can speak only about daily conversations.
What did I do, what I want, something like that.
I have to speak about more specific topics such as the news, academic contents, or economic contents.
I need more time to study about that.
When I can speak fluently about these kinds of contents, it means " I speak English."
It's my goal!
How long do I need to achieve my goal ?...
Anyway, I'll do my best!!!
Diary of my life in Canada July 20
Nowadays, I feel I'm getting to used to speaking English more fluently!I'm really happy! Thanks* everyone who corrected my notebook!
But I still have some problems.
First, I can only speak only about daily conversation day-to-day matters:.**
What did I do, what I want, somethings like that.
I have to can be able to speak about more specific topics such as the news, academic contents,*** or economic contents.
I need more time to study about that.
When I can be speak fluently about these kinds of contents matters, it will really means " I speak English."
It's my goal!
How long do I need to go to my goal.....
Anyway, I'll do my best!!!
* or, "Thanks to everyone. . ." either one is fine.
** I think "day-to-day matters" sounds better. Matters works a lot like 物. Day-to-day means regular daily "stuff." Also, I changed the period (.) to a colon (:) because the next thing you say is a list of day-to-day matters. Colon is good before lists of things.
*** Contents. As a plural (with the "s" at the end), this word means the things inside of something else (like the ingredients of your breakfast cereal). But when you are talking about a special kind of content, it's better as singular (without the "s"). There are other words you could use here. "Subjects" or "matters" or "topics" would work, and are probably better than "content." If you use any of those, they are plural. (I know! English is confusing (笑))
Diary of my life in Canada July 20
Nowadays, I feel I'm getting to used to speak English more fluently!I'm really happy! Thanks everyone who corrected my notebook!
But I still have some problems.
First, I can speak only about daily conversation.
What did I do, what I want, something like that.
I have to can be speak about more specific topics such as the news, academic contents, or economic contents. ("have to" means i really really need. "can" means a capability to do something , for example "i can read, write... can run a marathon etc.)
I need more time to study about that.
When I can be (you don't need 2 verbs:) )speak fluently about these kinds of contents topics (the best word to use), it means " I can speak English."
It's my goal!
How long do I need to go (reach/achieve) my goal.....
Anyway, I'll do my best!!!
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