marriage
Marriage isn't easy decision to take . i wonder why some people in young age can take this step easier than people in older age , in my opinion year after year you see the definiation of love and marriage more clear , you reach to the complete imagine of your character , from this point you should start to find your soulmate . I still wonder why young girls tend to find their soulmate instead of building their career and why they think the best achievement is marrying in young age . I think this idea relates to the way their parents look at them . My parents always support me to improving myself and achieving my goals . Iam chrisitain and we can't divorce easily so for me it is important to build my career until satisified and reach to fianicial stabilty so no man can put me under his control under the meaning of he is the only source of money for me . Be yourself , build your career and you will be a dream for everyone .
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When you are young love is pure because your heart is pure. After fooling around with a bunch of guys and girls (depending on how many bad experiences you had) you become a little less trusty a bit more suspicious of everything. So it becomes harder to trust. In addition when you are young there is more of a "lets do this together" attitude because everything is open for the future to explore. When a man/woman is in their 30's not much to explore. It becomes of a comparison of is this man/woman good enough for me, and sometimes no one is "good enough".
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marriage
Marriage isn't an easy decision to make . I wonder why young people in young age can take this step easier than older people in older age , in my opinion year after year you see the definiation of love and marriage more clearly , you reach to the complete imagine of your character , from this point you should start to find your soulmate . I still wonder why young girls tend to find their soulmate instead of building their career and why they think the best achievement is marrying in young age . I think this idea relates to the way their parents look at them . My parents always support me to improving myself and achieving my goals . I am chrisitain and we can't divorce easily so for me it is important to build my career until I am satisified and reach to fianicial stabilty. So no man can put me under his control under the meaning of with the though that he is the only source of money for me . Be yourself , build your career and you will be a dream for everyone .0
I am not a native English speaker and your writing is far and away above average so I consider I had better not revise your writing.
To get married at young age is never an easy decision to be made for a young girl unless personal special conditions, so are young boys. To the best of my knowledge, a large portion of young girls who married earlier is just because that they have already had babies and they do not want to kill a life in the womb. Living in a urban area of a modern society, you can barely see young women who have potentials or capacities in their work are eager to dive into marriage because they have much work to do and numerous ideals to be fulfilled, which is good for individuals. However, some girls chose to get married earlier is also a good alternative for their lifetime because they can really enjoy family life literally with their beloved families that is by no means replaced by any achievement in career, given that a responsible husband and a good wife are aming at building a good family for their children.
By and large, It is hard to say which one is better (early or late marriage) . I would have to say no matter which option you select, think twice and enjoy the option. After all, there are happy cases and miserable stories in either side. We can also observe that a successful woman in her workplace still wish to have a naive smile from a child and some of the business women are very regretful for not having a child in their young age.
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marriage
Marriage isn't an easy decision to take . i wonder why some people in young age can take this step easier than people in older age , in my opinion year after year you see the definition of love and marriage clearer , you reach the complete image of your character , from this point you should start searching for your soulmate . I still wonder why young girls tend to find their soulmate instead of building their career and why they think the best achievement is marrying in young age . I think this idea relates to the way their parents look at them . My parents always support me in improving myself and achieving my goals . Iam a christian and we can't divorce easily so for me it is important to build my career until satisified and reach financial stabilty so no man can put me under his control under the meaning of he is the only source of money for me . Be yourself , build your career and you will be a dream for everyone .Want to progress faster?
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