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One Hundred Years of Solitude
It has been almost a year since I read this book. Before finishing it, I made many attempts to read it, but the complexity of the story plus the uncountable number of characters and the absence of a main plot, discourage me.But finally, one day, I read it completely. It wasn't easy and I still don't understand why it is considered as one of the most important works of literature. Nevertheless, I can recognise how well written the book is, although neither the story nor the characters captivated me.
One Hundred Years of Solitude
It has been almost a year since I read this book. Before finishing it, I made many attempts to read it, but the complexity of the story plus the uncountable number of characters and the absence of a main plot, discouraged me.But finally, one day, I read it completely. It wasn't easy and I still don't understand why it is considered as one of the most important books of literature. Nevertheless, I can recognize how well written the book is, although neither the story nor the character captivated me.
Great work! :D
One Hundred Years of Solitude
It has been almost a year since I read this book. Before finishing, I had made many attempts to read it, but the complexity of the story, the uncountable number of characters, plus the absence of a main plot, often / greatly discouraged me.
But finally, one day, I read it completely. It wasn't easy and I still don't understand why it is considered as one of the most important works of literature. Nevertheless, I can recognize now how well written the book is, although neither the story nor the characters captivated me.
Good job! Just for making your way through that book I felt compelled to correct your writing! Seriously though, nothing much wrong about your post. I just added a comma to break up that 2nd sentence as I could not say it without taking a breath. Also, I changed the tense on "discouraged" as you were talking about the past, and finally, I used a "z" instead of an "s" in "recognize" (but perhaps, that is the British spelling of it?). I hope this helps. J.
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