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A day in Malaga 3. You see this announcement on an English-language travel website. ARTICLES WANTED A day in the city! We are looking for articles about how a visitor could have a great time in a city in your country in just one day. Write us an article telling us what a visitor can do, what they can see and how they can travel around. The best articles will be posted on our website. Write your article. Planning your day can be hard but not if I do for you. I live in Malaga so let me introduce you what you can do here in a day. It’s hard to visit Malaga in only one day but let me tell you what you should visit before you leave. Let me first point out that you should come to Malaga in May, June, September or October because the weather is still good for going to the beach and visiting monuments too. About the monuments I would recommend you to go to the Alcazaba which is a castle and next to it there is a roman theatre. Next thing you have to see is calle Larios, it’s a big street full of shops and places to eat. If I were you, I would go to Casa Mira to have an ice- cream. They have the best ice-creams ever. Another place you should go it’s Muelle Uno, where you can find luxury shops and restaurants. I recommend you to go over the night to have a drink. Another important thing in Malaga is the food. The typical foods here are “Gazpacho”, it’s like tomato soup and “Plato de los montes”, it’s a meal with meat, chips, fried eggs, sausages and roasted peppers. About desserts you should order “Loca” or “Brazo Gitano”. What are you waiting for? Come to my beautiful Malaga, you would love it.

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Good effort Maria. I also love the port and Alameda park, and a lot of tourists enjoy the English cemetery, the Botanical gardens, or getting a bus to Nerja to see the caves and seeing the old town and Europa point.  


A day in Malaga

3. You see this announcement on in an English-language travel website.
ARTICLES WANTED
A day in the city!

We are looking for articles about how a visitor could have a great time in a city in your country in just one day.
Write us an article telling us what a visitor can do, what they can see and how they can travel around.
The best articles will be posted on our website.
Write your article.

Planning your day can be hard but not if I do it for you. I live in Malaga, so let me introduce you to what you can do here in a day. It’s hard to visit Malaga in only one day but let me tell you what you should visit before you leave. [duplication of first and second sentence]

Let me first point out that you should come to Malaga in May, June, September or October because the weather is still good [warm enough] for going to the beach and visiting monuments too.

About Regarding the monuments I would recommend you to go to the Alcazaba which is a castle and next to it there is a Roman theatre. The next thing you have to see is Calle Larios, it’s a big wide (pedestrianised) street full of shops and places to eat. If I were you, I would go to Casa Mira to have an ice- cream. They have the best ice-creams ever. Another place you should go it’s is Muelle Uno, where you can find luxury shops and restaurants. I recommend you to go stay over the night overnight to have a drink.

Another important thing in Malaga is the food. The typical foods here are “Gazpacho”, it’s like tomato soup and “Plato de los montes”, it’s a meal with meat, chips, fried eggs, sausages and roasted peppers. About For desserts you should order “Loca” or “Brazo Gitano”.

What are you waiting for? Come to my beautiful Malaga, you would will love it.



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Hi Maria, Nicely written! Two minor corrections: Planning your day can be hard but not if I do( it) for you. You must use the "it" here. Roman needs a capital letter. Cheers, Gary Hocking ( Australia)

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