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I just got back / returned from my annual / semi-annual required military training for reserve soldiers here in Korea. Everything was fine, except for the weather and the food. It's so hot these days that I wanted to avoid the sunlight / stay out of the sun while I was waiting around for the / my training sessions, but sadly, it was only a wish! Fortunately, no one was injured, and I was able to get, and enjoy, enough sleep. Not bad I think!

Good job! Nice use of your personal experience as the topic of your essay. As to the writing, you are doing well. Just improve your vocabulary to assist with your sentence construction. I, too, used to be on active duty many years ago, as well as have reserve duty afterwards, so I am very familiar with what you go through. I distinctly remember the “Hurry up and (then) wait!” mentality of training! And honestly, I still do not think that I have caught up on my lost sleep yet! Glad that you survived! Keep writing and keep posting! J.

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