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I had always imagined being a free person, so when someone asked me what my dream was I remembered Bohemia.  I thought it was a cool place and answered that I wanted to live in Bohemia.  (Not sure what you meant by this, do you want to live in Bohemia?)  I also wanted to be a musician like Beethoven, and I wanted to be an explorer whenever I watched the Discovery Channel.

Perhaps,I decided to attend to university for studying design because I admired artists.
Before I go to university, I dreamed I would get my goals about playing,studying,experince somethings. However, I didn't do all my best for the goals and I excused and had a rationalization that I have a right to spending my time like this.

Perhaps I decided to attend university to study design because I admired artists.  Before I went to university, I dreamed I would achieve my goals of playing, studying, and experiencing many things.  However, I didn't do my best to achieve these goals, so I made excuses and rationalized that I had a right to spend my time like this.

a cold day of February, I watched a movie at my home and cried a lot. the main actor imagine a lot to eascape his day routine and live without any brave oppositely his teenager years. Somehow I felt I could see some of me to walter. who live as following the time without any purposes. at that time, I asked my self.
What I really want in my life? Just be brave for only 20 second. Catch your young dream living as a wolrd traveler and that year, I traveled to europe for making my dream real first. I went to the hospital and lost many ways while traveling, It was an opportunity to see back my life and after this travel, I keep trying all goals what I wished.

On a cold day in February, I watched a movie at home and cried a lot.  The main character imagined a way to escape from his daily routine and live bravely in contrast to his teenage years.  Somehow I felt I could see some of myself in Walter, who lived carefree and without purpose.  At that time I asked myself, "What do I really want in life?"  To be brave for only 20 seconds and pursue my dream of traveling the world.  That year I traveled to Europe and made my dream a reality.  I went to the hospital and got lost many times while traveling.  It was an opportunity to take back my life, and because of this (journey/experience) I always try to pursue my goals.

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