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Erection 3 days ago, we had a erection for serecting councilors in Japan. This time was big different from former ones. 18 year old people was able to vote. By last erection people had a right to vote from 20 years old. As a result of that, 54.7% of people who have a right went to vote. It is said that more young people should vote.

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ELECTION! An "erection" is something VERY different ;) 勃起


Election

3 days ago we had an election for selecting new councilors. This time was big very different from former ones (or "previous elections") as 18 year old people (or "18 year olds) was are now able to vote. By last Before this election, people only had a right to vote from 20 years old. As a result of that ***  54.7% of people who have a the right went to vote. It is said that more and more young people should vote.


***Do you mean by result of the new rules? If so you should say something like - "As a result of the change in the minimum age of voting...." or if you mean before the change in voting age you could say "Because of the restrictions on the age of voting, only 54.7% of those eligible to vote turned out to vote.

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Erection, election

3 days ago, we had a erection election for serecting councilors in Japan. This time was big very different from former ones. 18 year old people was are now able to vote. By But last erection election people had a right to vote from at 20 years old. As a result of that, 54.7% of people who have a right to vote went to vote. It is said that more young people should vote.
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:D

I think maybe you mean... 'election'


Erection

3 days ago, we had a erection for serecting councilors in Japan. This time was big different from former ones. 18 year old people was able to vote. By last erection people had a right to vote from 20 years old. As a result of that, 54.7% of people who have a right went to vote. It is said that more young people should vote.

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