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My diary This morning was a crazy one. First, I couldn`t make out a time difference in Abkhazia. I thought it was like in Georgia, but I was mistaken. Because of my huge mistake, we woke up at 6 instead of lying in bed till 7, and in an hour we went to breakfast (it actually starts at 8). Cookers said we were early and we didn`t know what to do. Then we found a little sign saying “Beach” and followed it. I was quite surprised to find out that this beach is so clear and beautiful. It was pretty early and there weren`t people at all, so we made a little photoshoot, nobody could bother us. At 8 we returned to hotel and went to breakfast. We were told that this hotel had a buffet style and expected different tasty dishes like in Turkey`s hotels. Hardly had we reached the dining room when the food almost ran out. Luckily, there were 6 pancakes left and we shared them with my boyfriend. I was really disappointed as I felt hungry. After so called “breakfast” (we didn`t actually break our fast) we packed a suitcase and drove away to New Athos. We expected it wouldn`t take much time, but we were driving so long, that it took almost 2 hours. On the way we came across cows, horses and sheep which stopped us and we had to take a detour not to ride them down. Oh my gosh. Such fearless animals! Finally, we reached the place and needed to buy tickets. Then we had some meals and bought a chocolate ice-cream, it made me feel happier. After a while, it was time to visit caves. There I felt like I was in a fairytale. The New Athos cave is the second largest cave in the world and consists of 9 huge chambers. Each chamber is given a unique name and each one has its own special features. Some of them have underground rivers and lakes which don`t have any fish and are cold, others have large stalactites and stalagmites. It`s not allowed to take pics with a flash, but some groups don`t listen to guides, which is very disappointing as nature`s beauty is not eternal. 2 hours later, our excursion came to the end and we decided to get to the seashore. At 5 PM, we had to drive back to Russia. On the border, we successfully came through check-up in the customs office and entered our country without problems. Such a relief. The rest of the day, I spent doing English grammar and reading a book. That`s all for now. Good bye, Nastya

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My Diary

This morning was a crazy one. First, I couldn`t make out the time difference in Abkhazia. I thought it was like in Georgia, but I was mistaken. Because of my huge mistake, we woke up at 6 instead of lying in bed till 7, and in an hour we went to breakfast (it actually starts at 8). The cooks said we were early and we didn`t know what to do. Then we found a little sign saying “Beach” and followed it. I was quite surprised to find out that this beach is so clean and beautiful. It was pretty early and there weren't any people at all, so we made a little photo shoot. There was no one there bother us.
At 8 we returned to the hotel and went to breakfast. We were told that this hotel served buffet style breakfast and we expected different tasty dishes like in Turkey`s hotels. Hardly had we reached the dining room when the food almost ran out. Luckily, there were 6 pancakes left and we shared them with my boyfriend.
I was really disappointed as I still felt hungry.
After our so called “breakfast” (we didn`t actually break our fast) we packed a suitcase and drove away to New Athos.
We expected it wouldn`t take much time, but we were driving so long that it took almost 2 hours. On the way we came across cows, horses and sheep in the road which stopped us and we had to take a detour so as not to run them over . Oh my gosh. Such fearless animals!
Finally, we reached New Athos and needed to buy tickets.  We also ate and bought a chocolate ice-cream. It made me feel happier. After a while, it was time to visit the caves.
There I felt like I was in a fairy tale. The New Athos cave is the second largest cave in the world and consists of 9 huge chambers. Each chamber is given a unique name and each one has its own special features. Some of them have underground rivers and lakes which don`t have any fish and are cold, others have large stalactites and stalagmites. You are not allowed to take pics (photos) with a flash, but some groups didn't listen to guides, which is very disappointing, as nature`s beauty is not eternal.
Two hours later our excursion came to the end and we decided to go to the seashore.
At 5 PM, we had to drive back to Russia. At the border we successfully passed through the checkpoint in the customs office customs and entered our country without problems. Such a relief.
The rest of the day, I spent doing English grammar and reading a book.
That`s all for now.
Good bye,
Nastya
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My diary

This morning was a crazy one. First, I couldn`t make out a time difference in Abkhazia. I thought it was like in Georgia, but I was mistaken. Because of my huge mistake, we woke up at 6 instead of lying in bed till 7, and in an hour later we went to breakfast (it actually startsed at 8). Cookers The cooks said we were early and we didn`t know what to do. Then we found a little sign saying “Beach” and followed it. I was quite surprised to find out that this beach is was so clear and beautiful. It was pretty early and there weren`t people at all, so we made a little photoshoot, nobody could bother us. and nobody bothered us.
At 8 eight we returned to the hotel and went to breakfast. We were told that this hotel had a buffet style and expected different tasty dishes like in Turkey`s hotels. Hardly had we We had hardly reached the dining room when the food almost ran out. Luckily, there were 6 pancakes left and we shared them with my boyfriend.
I was really disappointed as I felt and hungry.
After so called “breakfast” (we didn`t actually break our fast) we packed a suitcase and drove away to New Athos.
We expected it wouldn`t take much time, but we were driving so long, that it took almost 2 hours. On the way we came across cows, horses, and sheep which stopped us and we had to take a detour not to ride them down.  so as not to run over them. Oh my gosh. Such fearless animals!
Finally, we reached the place and needed to buy tickets. Then we had some meals and bought a chocolate ice-cream, it made me feel happier. After a while, it was time to visit caves.
There I felt like I was in a fairytale. The New Athos cave is the second largest cave in the world and consists of 9 nine huge chambers. Each chamber is given a unique name and each one has its own special features. Some of them have underground rivers and lakes which don`t have any fish and are cold, others have large stalactites and stalagmites. It`s not allowed to take pics with a flash, but some groups don`t listen to guides, which is very disappointing as nature`s beauty is not eternal.
2 two hours later, our excursion came to the an end and we decided to get go to the seashore.
At 5 PM, we had to drive back to Russia. On the border, we successfully came got through check-up in the customs office and entered our country without problems. Such a relief.
The rest of the day, I spent doing English grammar and reading a book.
That`s all for now.
Good bye,
Nastya



Text written in blue is a suggestion for what would sound more natural. Generally, any number under 10 is written out in "word form". I was very impressed with your English! Keep up the great work!

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Absolutely beautiful photo.

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