Favorite Movie
I am going to talk about my favorite movie which is named "Arráncame la Vida", it is a Mexican movie and I like this much because its protagonist is a elegant, strong and pretty woman who married with a old coronel when she was 15 years old, however in spite of her age, she was falling in love. But over time she know a men of her same age who is a pianist and she seeing with him on the quiet. She felt that he is her love of life. When her husband who is a power and bad person realized of this, he commands to kill to the pianist.
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Favorite Movie
I am going to talk about my favorite movie which is named "Arráncame la Vida". it This film is a Mexican movie and I like this it so much because its protagonist is an elegant, strong, and pretty woman who married with an old coronel when she was 15 years old,.However in spite of her age, she was falling in love. But over time she knew a man of her same age who is was a pianist. and she seeing with him on the quiet. She was seeing him secretly. She felt that he is was the her love of her life. When her husband, who is was a powerful and bad person realized of this, he commandsed (who did he command?)to kill to the pianist.Very good job! Things in blue are my suggestion for what would sound more natural. I wish you the best of luck in your continued learning of the English language!
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