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Picnic Tommorow I will go to the Daegu with my classmates.Because we have to learn about dream and future job.I want to be a flight attendant. But tommorow I learn about camera and k-pop stars.I excite it.

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Tommorow I will go to the Daegu with my classmates.Because we have to learn about dream and future job.I want to be a flight attendant. But tommorow I learn about camera and k-pop stars.I excite it.

Tomorrow I will go to Daegu with my classmates because we have to learn about dreams and future jobs. I want to be a flight attendant. However, tomorrow I will learn about cameras and k-pop stars. I am excited. 

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