Summer vacation
Summer vacation is coming! So many things want to do. Like learn how to drive, how to set a website and also want to find a part-time job so I can use my own money to buy what I want.
But here is a bad thing:now is 3am but I can't sleep. Don't ask me why because I don't know either...
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Summer vacation
Summer vacation is coming! THERE are so many things I want to do, like learn how to drive and how to makeset a website. I and also want to find a part-time job so I can use my own money to buy what I want.But here is the a bad thing: right now it is 3am but I can't sleep. Don't ask me why because I don't know either...
Hi Chloe,
Happy summer vacation!
I hope these corrections help. Remember, in English you always need a subject. In your paragraph, it's you ( the person doing the action, "I") or "it" when talking about time (e.g., It's 3 am.) or "there" which is a little different but functions as the subject.
I'm available for writing classes if you are interested in continuing to work on your writing. :)
Nancy
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Maybe the reason you can't sleep is because you're so excited about your summer break. I often can't sleep when I'm too excited either.
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Summer vacation
Summer vacation is coming! There are so many things want to do, like learn how to drive and how to set up a website. and I also want to find a part-time job, so I can use my own money to buy whatever I want.
But here is a bad thing:now is it's already 3am, but I can't sleep. Don't ask me why because I don't know either...
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