My Day
I woke up, I took a shower, and then I had breakfast. I went to house of my grandparents early and I lunched there. Then, I studied some hours for the college when I arrived to my house. At the afternoon, when It seemed It was going to rain, I went out to eat pizza and drink beer with some friends, It was very funny and we had a good time. Then, when I arrived to my house, I resumed a book I’ve liked too much called “Breve Historia de la Filosofía” by Humberto Giannini. The chapter I was reading It was about Aristotle and René Descartes, both are very interesting.
If I have some mistake, please tell me :)
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My Day
Today I woke up, took a shower, and (then) had breakfast. I went to my grandparents' house early and ate lunch/had lunch there. Then, I studied for a few hours for the college when I got home. In the afternoon, when it seemed like it was going to rain, I went out to eat pizza and drink beer with some friends. It was very fun and we had a good time. Then, when I returned home/got back to my house/got home, I continued reading a book I’ve been liking a lot called “Breve Historia de la Filosofía” by Humberto Giannini. The chapter I read was about Aristotle and René Descartes, both of whom are very interesting.
If I made any mistakes, please tell me :)
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Looks good! Though grammatically most if it was correct, I changed some phrases to make it sound more natural.
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