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Which road should I take? :s I've been living (can I say I've been passing for??) moments of indecision in my life. Despite I'm not an adolescent anymore I have been facing some terrible situations. All of them are, in certain way, linked to my professional future. I don't know which way to chose. I am just like the persona of that poem by Robert Frost: "The road not taken", but to me it's been worse because I'm just at the beginning of the whole situation. I know we always have to make choices or to take decisions, but I am afraid of taking the wrong one. I think I can wait a little more time until to make my choice. I'll think and rethink my possibilities in order to make the right thing. But I know sooner or later (mais cedo ou mais tarde?) I'll have to take some risks.

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Which road should I take? :s

I've been living (can I say I've been passing for?? No.  Having and Experiencing are possibilities.  Living is ok, but it sounds kind of redundant because of your phrase in my life.) moments of indecision in my life. Despite the fact  (Even though) I'm not an adolescent anymore I have been facing some terrible situations. All of them are, in certain ways, linked to my professional future. I don't know which way to choose. I am just like the persona character of that poem by Robert Frost, "The road not taken", but to for me it's been worse because I'm just at the beginning of the whole situation. I know we always have to make choices or to take make decisions, but I am afraid of taking making the wrong one.
I think I can wait a little more time until to make before making my choice. I'll think and rethink my possibilities in order to make do the right thing. But I know sooner or later (mais cedo ou mais tarde? Isso mesmo!) I'll have to take some risks.

Good job!  Some advice:  Always take the high road.  ;)

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Which road should I take? :s

I've been living experiencing (can I say I've been passing for?? no) moments of indecision in my life. Despite I'm not being an adolescent anymore I have been facing some terrible situations. All of them are, in certain ways, linked to my professional future. I don't know which way to choose. I am just like the persona of that poem by Robert Frost: "The road not taken", but to me it's been worse because I'm just at the beginning of the whole situation. I know we always have to make choices or to take decisions, but I am afraid of taking the wrong one.
I think I can wait a little longer more time until I to make my choice. I'll think and rethink my possibilities in order to make the right one thing. But I know sooner or later (mais cedo ou mais tarde?) I'll have to take some risks.

These are all the changes that are needed. It is now perfectly understandable. Some things could be said differently but they will no longer be the things that you said.


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I know exactly how you feel. However, I think most roads are linked...it's spotting the connections and making people believe you believe in yourself when you take a new turn in the road that is the problem. :)

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