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The government of a country should pay for health care and education of its citizens. Many people believe that the government of a country should pay for health care and education of its citizens. Do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give your own opinion. Actually, every government should pay attention their citizens especially in such areas as education and medicine, because it helps people feel satisfied. I am convinced that there are a lot of reasons to support this opinion. First and foremost, government should invest to own citizens, because in the future they will pay taxes and consequently will be provide government’s economical programs. At the same time if it is certainly true that healthy people are working more efficiently and longer. In contrast sick people spend less time at work and more time in the hospitals and go through out the medical examinations. That is why, it is very important is supporting citizens health from early age. There is no doubt that educational people is a basis for employers and country’s economies in the whole. Definitely, people who has a higher education can find more high salary job and absolutely exact will pay more taxes and of course it very profitable for government. Probably , if government provide their habitants different kind of education it can prepare needed specialists in certain areas in economics. In this occasion government can regulate amount of specialists in each sphere. On the other hand, there is a drawback in this situation. If our government will resources to humans health and education it would responsibly to have some guaranties that people do not leave country after education. And it could be return it investment.

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On the other hand, there is a drawback to this situation. If our government will invest resources to human health and education, it would be responsible to have some guaranties that people do not leave country after their education. And it could be return on investment.

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The government of a country should pay for health care and education of its citizens. I suggest: Governments should pay for the health care and education of their citizens.

Many people believe that the government of a country should pay for the health care and education of its citizens.
Do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give your own opinion.

Good job - Italki would not let me post my corrections at once, so I have divided the essay into three parts. My apologies!
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Actually, every government should pay attention to their citizens especially, in such areas as education and medicine, because it helps people feel satisfied.

I am convinced that there are a lot of reasons to support this opinion. First and foremost, government should invest to in it's own citizens, because in the future they will pay taxes and consequently will be provide government’s economical programs. At the same time if it is certainly true that healthy people are working more efficiently and longer. In contrast, sick people spend less time at work and more time in the hospitals and going through out the medical examinations. That is why, it is very important is to supporting citizens health from an early age. There is no doubt that educated people are the is a basis for employers and the country’s economy in on the whole. Definitely, people who have has a higher education can find a more high salary job and absolutely exact will consequently pay more taxes, and which is, of course, it very profitable for the government. Probably , if government provide their habitants citizens different kinds of education it can prepare needed specialists in certain areas of the in economy. In this way, occasion governments can regulate the amount of specialists in each sphere.

Very good essay! It was a very technical topic, but you conveyed the meaning well. Please let me know if you would like any explanations for my suggested edits. I apologize that I couldn't post the full correction - italki has a character limit. Thanks! - Laura


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The government of a country should pay for health care and education of its citizens.

Many people believe that the government of a country should pay for health care and education of its citizens.
Do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give your own opinion.

Actually, every government should pay attention TO their citizens especially in such FIELDS as education and PUBLIC HEALTH, because it helps people feel satisfied.
I am convinced that there are a lot of reasons to support this opinion.

First and foremost, government should invest MONEY FOR    THEIR own citizens, because in the future they will pay taxes SO AS TO contribute towards government’s economical programs. At the same time if it is certainly true that healthy people DO WORK more efficiently and FOR A longer TIME, In contrast sick people spend less time at work and more time in hospitals and for any medical examinations. That is why, it is very important TO TAKE CARE OF FELLOW PEOPLE'S health from their early age. There is no doubt that HAVING People WITH A HIGH EDUCATIONAL LEVEL  IS  BOUND TO improve and empower both employers's opportunities and country’s economy AS A WHOLE. Definitely, people who ENJOY A HIGHER RATE OF education can find  A high salary job more easily and AS A MATTER OF FACT THEY ARE EXPECTED TO pay more taxes  TO MAKE THE GOVERNMENT BENEFIT FROM THEM as well. MOREOVER IT IS LIKELY THAT BY PROVIDing different kinds of education, governments can shape  professionals fit for any kind of public and social services. And what's more, national governments can even regulate the amount of specialists available in each sphere of public needs.

Notwithstanding,there could be a drawback in the situation descrived above: as our government make provision for people's health and education, then who has taken advantage in it, should not   leave the country as Soon as they fulfil their educational training, or at least as far as they have returned government  investiments  paid  for them


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