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30天中文写作挑战 (30/30) – 挑战总结 今天是最后天的中文写作挑战。 我很高兴到最后写作了。 不是容易的任务,因为我很忙,所以我需要找了时间写字。 哪怕短短,每个文章的写做30分钟1小时之间。 如果我知道了我一天不会供,我提前得写了文章。 选话题有点难,因为得容易而且有味儿。 原来,我日内要改正我的文章,可是20天以后我必须停了,因为我做改正一点半二点半之间, 所以没有空。 我想这个挑战帮助了我向上,为了我试用了过去学习新的句式和新的词汇。 在未来的天,我要完改正,还学习一切新的词汇。我要考试HSK3。 我真要谢谢人人帮助了我从这个挑战。你们都很和蔼还有助,我很高兴。 在将来,我写其他文章,也可能做一个挑战,可是现在是时候休息! Hi, after 30 days, today is the ultimate day of my Chinese writing challenge. To conclude, I want to make a debrief of this month. Thank you so much to all the people that allow me to make a successful challenge by giving me corrections and advices!!! Have a wonderful day! Here is the English translation of the text above : Today is the last day of my Chinese writing challenge. I am very happy that I made it to the end. It wasn’t an easy task because I am very busy, so I needed to find some time to write. Even though they are short, each text took me between 30 minutes and 1 hour to write. If I knew I would not be available one day, I had to write my texts in advance. Choosing topics can sometimes be hard, because it must be both easy and interesting. At first, I wanted to correct my text one or two days after posting them, but I had to stop it at day 20 because corrections took me between 1 hour and a half and 2 hours and a half, so I didn’t have the time. I feel that this challenge has really helped me make progress, as I tried to use new sentences structures and new vocabulary that I learn in my previous texts. In the following days, I will finish my corrections and learn all the new vocabulary. I am aiming to pass HSK3. I really wanted to thank all the people that have helped me through this challenge. You have all been so nice and helpful, I am very glad. In the future, I will write other entries, and maybe do another challenge, but right now it is time to rest!

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30天中文写作挑战 (30/30) – 挑战总结

今天是最后一天的中文写作挑战。
我很高兴我最终做到了到最后写作了。
这不是一个容易的任务,因为我很忙,所以我需要抽空找了时间去写作写字。
哪怕很短短,每篇个文章也要花费我的写做30分钟到1小时之间。
如果我知道了我哪天没空一天不会供,我就必须得提前得写好了文章。
选话题有点难,因为得容易而且有趣有味儿(Usually used in oral language)。
起初原来,我想在发表文章后一两天内改正我日内要改正我的文章,可是20天以后我必须停了,因为我做改正要用一个点半到二个点半小时的时间之间, 所以我没有空。
我想这个挑战对我取得进步很有帮助了我向上,为了我试着使用试用了在过去的文章中学习到的新的句式和新的词汇。
在接下来的日子里未来的天,我要完成文章的改正,还要学习一切新的词汇。我要通过考试HSK3考试。
我真的很想感谢所有帮助我通过这个挑战的人。你们都很友善并且乐于助人还有助,我很高兴。
在将来,我会写其他文章,也可能做另一个挑战,可是现在是时候休息了!

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30天中文写作挑战 (30/30) – 挑战总结

今天是最后一天的中文写作挑战。
我很高兴坚持到最后了。
这不是容易的任务,因为我很忙,所以我需要找了时间写字作。
哪怕是很短短时间,每个文章的写做也需要花费30分钟1小时之间。
如果我我知道某天会没有空闲去写作,我必须得提前得完写了文章。

选话题有点难,因为得容易而且有味儿有趣。

原来,我日内要改正我的文章想在发布文章后的一到两天内改正他们,可是20天以后我必须停我得停止了,因为我做改正作需要花费一个半至两个半小时时间, 所以我没有空充足的时间。

我想这个挑战帮助了我向上进步,为了并且我试用了过去学习的新的句式和新的词汇。

之后的日子里,我要完成改正,还并学习一切新的词汇。我要考试通过HSK3考试。

我真要谢谢所有人帮助了我从完成这个挑战。你们都很和蔼可亲还有助乐于助人,我很高兴。

在将来,我会写其他文章,也可能做另一个挑战,可是现在是时候休息了!


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30天中文写作挑战 (30/30) – 挑战总结

今天是最后天中文写作挑战。(今天是最后一次中文写作挑战)
我很高兴到最后写作了。(我很高兴能坚持到现在)
不是容易的任务,(这是一项艰巨的任务)

因为我很忙,

所以我需要找了时间写字。(所以我需要腾出空来写作)
哪怕短短(哪怕文章再短),

每个文章的写做30分钟1小时之间。(每个文章我也需要花费30分钟至1小时)
如果我知道了我一天不会供,我提前得写了文章。(I don't know what you wanna mean)
选话题有点难,

因为得容易而且有味儿。(因为得容易而且有趣)
原来,我日内要改正我的文章,(原本,我一天之内就要把写的文章改好)

可是20天以后我必须停了,(可是仅仅持续了20天我不得不停止这样做)

因为我做改正一点半二点半之间, 所以没有空。(因为我只能在一点半至两点半间有空修改,但是却没有太多空闲时间)
我想这个挑战帮助了我向上(我想这个挑战帮助我又前进了一步),

为了我试用了过去学习新的句式和新的词汇。(因为我从中学习到了新的句式和词汇)
在未来的天,我要完改正,(在未来几天,我要把他们全部修改完)

还学习一切新的词汇。我要考试HSK3。(还要学习新的词汇,我想参加HSK3考试)
我真要谢谢人人帮助了我从这个挑战。(我要真诚地感谢每一位帮助过我的人)

你们都很和蔼还有助,我很高兴。(你们都很和蔼热情,我很高兴)
在将来,我写其他文章,(也许将来我还写其他文章)

也可能做一个挑战,可是现在是时候休息!(像这样的一个挑战。可是我现在必须得休息了)



Hi, after 30 days, today is the ultimate day of my Chinese writing challenge. To conclude, I want to make a debrief of this month. Thank you so much to all the people that allow me to make a successful challenge by giving me corrections and advices!!! Have a wonderful day! Here is the English translation of the text above :

Today is the last day of my Chinese writing challenge. I am very happy that I made it to the end. It wasn’t an easy task because I am very busy, so I needed to find some time to write. Even though they are short, each text took me between 30 minutes and 1 hour to write. If I knew I would not be available one day, I had to write my texts in advance. Choosing topics can sometimes be hard, because it must be both easy and interesting. At first, I wanted to correct my text one or two days after posting them, but I had to stop it at day 20 because corrections took me between 1 hour and a half and 2 hours and a half, so I didn’t have the time. I feel that this challenge has really helped me make progress, as I tried to use new sentences structures and new vocabulary that I learn in my previous texts. In the following days, I will finish my corrections and learn all the new vocabulary. I am aiming to pass HSK3. I really wanted to thank all the people that have helped me through this challenge. You have all been so nice and helpful, I am very glad. In the future, I will write other entries, and maybe do another challenge, but right now it is time to rest!

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谢谢你们!Actually I searched for and used a lot of new words for the challenge, because my vocabulary was too poor to rely simply on it. The corrections people gave me were also very useful to progress in sentence structures. It took me a lot of time but I think it is worth it :)
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Hi! I think I'm quite on your level (I could read most of what you wrote) but I still learned a lot of words from this text! Thanks a lot, you're helping me too!

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