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Hi Nicole, a couple of points:

1. 我的名字叫。。。Usually, the verb 叫 (jiao4) is used when telling someone your name. It translates to "to be called." You can also say "我叫。。。“。

2.  我是一個女孩。 The word 女人 is usually reserved for more generalized statements (for example, there is a song called "女人到底想什么”， which translates approximately to "What on earth do women think?") or for emphasis in particular contexts. If you are a young woman, you can use the word 女孩 (hai2) in this case. Although this means "girl," it also refers to young women. 女生 (sheng1) can be used for older women.

3.  你今天怎么样？ Because you were talking about yourself in the previous two sentences, it is appropriate to include a subject word here to indicate that you are changing the subject to 你 rather than 我。

4.  我今年十七歲了。今年 (jin1 nian2) means "this year," and is commonly added to sentences stating one's age (although it is not necessary). After the age, you must add  歲 (sui4), which means "years of age". 了 is added to indicate continuance in this case - you are still aging, but at this point in time you are 十七歲。了 is a little tricky, and it takes some time to learn when and where to use it.

Good job, and please let me know if you have any questions! 加油！

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我是一個十七歲的女孩 。

今天怎么样？ 我 很好。谢谢！♥

我剛學會了一點句子。請指正。

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今天怎么样？

我 很好。

我 十七。
谢谢

我學到了几句对话，请指正。

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In China, a married women we call her as 女人，and I think 女孩 or 女生 are suitable for you more.Because you only have 17 years old.aha I am 22years old.could U add my skype；18219478232 then we can learn more from each other.^^