Letter to the Editor: "Tapeo" would be the best Local Restaurant of the year
Dear Sir Jones,
I am writing to you to nominate "Tapeo" as the best local restaurant of the year in our city. I want to share my opinion with you and all readers.
"Tapeo" is a restaurant located in one of the best areas of downtown, surrunded by parks, shopping centers, and beautiful buildings which make that a pleasure to eat there.
Besides, season and local products are well treated on the restaurant menu in my opinion. Fresh vegetables, good cuality meat and excelent seafood served with tasty sauces to get started and delicius deserts made with fruit to finish make a nice meal in this restaurant that is modern and tradicional at the same time.
Hence, I think "Tapeo" is a good place for lunch and dinner in this town and as a consequence it should win this award.
Yours faithfully,
María José García
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Letter to the Editor: "Tapeo" would be the best Local Restaurant of the year
Dear Sir Jones,I am writing to you to nominate "Tapeo" as the best local restaurant of the year in our city. I want to share my opinion with you and all (of) your/the readers.
"Tapeo" is a restaurant located in one of the best areas of downtown, surrounded by parks, shopping centers, and beautiful buildings which make it a pleasure to eat there.
Besides that, seasonal and local produce are well treated on the restaurant menu in my opinion*. Fresh vegetables, good quality meat and excellent seafood are all served with tasty sauces to get started and delicious desserts made with fruit to finish make a nice meal in this restaurant that is modern and traditional at the same time.
Hence/Therefore/So(1), I think "Tapeo" is a good place for lunch and dinner in this town and as a consequence therefore/so it should win this award.
Yours faithfully,
María José García
Well done! :)
*I'm not too sure what you mean here. Do you want to say that the restaurant serves locally sourced products?
Notes
1. "Hence" sounds a bit archaic. It's not wrong, but 'therefore' or 'so' are used a lot more frequently. 'Therefore' would suit the formal tone of your letter a lot better than 'so.'
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