Linkedin presentation.
Hello everyone,
can someone help me to translate the text below? It is my presentation (introduction) on Linkedin.
Thank you for your help.
Testo italiano
Possiedo spiccate attitudini comunicative e di espressione orale acquisite principalmente grazie agli studi effettuati.
Le esperienze lavorative mi hanno permesso di maturare elevate capacità di lavorare in team, in ambiente multiculturale, occupando posti in cui la comunicazione è importante e in situazioni in cui è essenziale il lavoro di squadra.
Sono una persona dinamica, responsabile e costante nel raggiungere gli obiettivi. Ho una spiccata capacità di adattamento e riesco a pianificare ed organizzare lavoro e tempo libero.
Mi pongo in maniera positiva verso i cambiamenti e la flessibilità.
Ho grande dimistichezza nell’uso degli strumenti informatici.
Translation
I have remarkable (strong) communication and verbal skills acquired mainly due to studies.
Work experience allowed me to mature high ability to work in team, in multicultural environments, in positions where communication is important and (situations where) teamwork is essential.
I am a dynamic, responsible and constant (consistent) person in (to) achieving the objectives (target). I have strong (remarkable) ability to adapt and I plan and organize work and leisure (free time).
I place myself positively (in a positive way) towards changes and flexibility.
I have great familiarity in the use of IT tools.
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Linkedin Introduction
Hello everyone,
Can someone help me translate the text below? It's my introduction on Linkedin.
I have strong communication and verbal skills, that I acquired from studying. My work experience, has allowed me to work well in a team setting, in multicultural environments, mainly where communication is important, and teamwork is essential to complete a task. I am a responsible, dynamic, and consistent person, when it comes to completing work objectives. I have a remarkable ability to adapt to changing work environments, including planning and organization. If change occurs, I remain positive and flexible in order to get the job done. I am very familiar with Information Technology, and the use of IT tools, both in a business setting and personal use.
Erminio, I think your introduction needed to be rewritten this way, because it gives it a more professional "feel", while I understand where you are coming from with the translation, to me it sounded a little hard to follow, maybe because of the way the translation was given. I hope my corrections help. If you have any questions, please ask!
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Translation
Work experience allowed me to mature high ability to work in team, in multicultural environments, in positions where communication is important and (situations where) teamwork is essential.
I am a dynamic, responsible and constant (consistent) person in (to) achieving the objectives (target). I have strong (remarkable) ability to adapt and I plan and organize work and leisure (free time).
I place myself positively (in a positive way) towards changes and flexibility.
I have great familiarity in the use of IT tools.
Hi Erminio
I would have written in this style rather than a direct translation of your Italian text:
I have studied hard to achieve excellent communication skills which have allowed me to become a good team player in a multicultural work environment where these skills are essential. I am a dynamic, responsible and reliable person achieving set targets through planning and organising my work and leisure time. I have a positive attitude to change and can adapt well in a fast moving world and am a confident user of major I.T. applications.
I hope this is of help and look forward to seeing your entry on Linked-in
John
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