男性进化成低频声音为了吓跑别的男性
科学家们发现了为什么有男性有特别低调的声音。传统上，有人认为男性进化了低频声音为了吸引女性。然而美国宾夕法尼亚州立大学的人类学家们认为男性进化为低频音是为了吓跑别的男性。研究者David Puts说：“人类 ，可能还有别的灵长类的男性进化了低频声音主要地为了威胁别的男性，而且让自己好似更大也更恐吓。”他还说：“人类男性的特性意味身体攻击能力和威烈，这些特性的竞争优势在斗争或者威胁别的男性的时候比在吸引女性的时候更多。”
宾夕法尼亚立大学的研究们录音了多于500男性和女性对话。然后播放了录音给多于1100男性和女性听。男性志愿者听了录音，然后根据他们的感觉评价了每个男性的优劣。15个女性根据她感觉评价了同一男性的浪漫吸引力。男性也根据他们的感觉评价了女性的吸引力。大部分的男性认为录音上低频声音属于更有优势的男性。Puts博士说女性也喜欢低频声音，但是他还说女性的评价结果让他结论男性的声音音调对女性不是很重要。
Men Developed Deep Voices to Scare Other Men
Scientists have cast new light on why some men have deeper voices than others. It was traditionally thought that males developed a lower pitched voice to attract members of the opposite sex. However, anthropologists at the American college Penn State believe a deep voice was to scare off other males. Researcher David Puts said: "In humans, and possibly other primates too, a low pitched voice evolved primarily to intimidate other men…to make males seem bigger and scarier." He added that: "Human male traits imply physical aggression and formidability and seem to provide competitive advantages in fighting or threatening other men more than they help attract women."
The researchers at Penn State recorded more than 500 men and women speaking. They then played the recordings back to more than 1,100 different people of both sexes. Male volunteers rated each male recording for levels of dominance they perceived in the voices. The same recordings were rated by 15 female volunteers for romantic attractiveness. Men similarly rated the women's voices for attractiveness. Most of the men thought the lower-pitched male recordings belonged to a more dominant man. Dr Puts said women also liked lower-pitched voices, but the pattern of the women's ratings did not lead him to say that the deepness of the male voice was so important to females.
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Although we can undestand the gist of what you are saying but sounds awkward to Chinese ears. This is because you translate too direct and do not use much idioms etc. However, there are places you just hit on the right spot. With enough practice, you will do well. Here's my version. Please feel to ask if you have questions. The ellipsis denotes no change.
男性进化成低频声音为了吓跑别的男性
科学家们发现了为什么有男性有特别低调的声音。传统上，有人认为男性进化了低频声音为了吸引女性。然而美国宾夕法尼亚州立大学的人类学家们认为男性进化为低频音是为了吓跑别的男性。研究者David Puts说：“人类 ，可能还有别的灵长类的男性进化了低频声音主要地为了威胁别的男性，而且让自己好似更大也更恐吓。”他还说：“人类男性的特性意味身体攻击能力和威烈，这些特性的竞争优势在斗争或者威胁别的男性的时候比在吸引女性的时候更多。”宾夕法尼亚立大学的研究们录音了多于500男性和女性对话。然后播放了录音给多于1100男性和女性听。男性志愿者听了录音，然后根据他们的感觉评价了每个男性的优劣。15个女性根据她感觉评价了同一男性的浪漫吸引力。男性也根据他们的感觉评价了女性的吸引力。大部分的男性认为录音上低频声音属于更有优势的男性。Puts博士说女性也喜欢低频声音，但是他还说女性的评价结果让他结论男性的声音音调对女性不是很重要。
Men Developed Deep Voices to Scare Other Men男人之有低沉 /語音/嗓子/ 是为恐吓其他男性
Scientists have cast new light on why some men have deeper voices than others. 科学家有新发现为何有些男性有更低沉的嗓子. It was traditionally thought that males developed a lower pitched voice to attract members of the opposite sex. 以前是被視为用來吸引异性However, anthropologists at the American college Penn State believe a deep voice was to scare off other males. 不过, 在美国宾夕法尼亚州立大学人类学家的看法, 是来一个下馬威. Researcher David Puts ... said: "In humans, and possibly other primates too, 在人类或者其他可能的灵长类中, a low pitched voice evolved primarily to intimidate other men… 低沉語音之慢慢演变, 其重用來威唬別雄性to make males seem bigger and scarier." 而顯其巨大与 可怕, He added that: "Human male traits imply physical aggression and formidability and seem to provide competitive advantages in fighting or threatening other men more than they help attract women." 再說, "人类男性性質似乎用来侵略, 以顯其英
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男性进化出低频声音是为了吓跑别的男性
科学家们最近发现了为什么有的男性具有特别低沉的声音。人们一般认为，男性进化出低频声音是为了吸引女性。然而，美国宾夕法尼亚州立大学的人类学家们认为，男性进化成低频音是为了吓跑别的男性。研究者David Puts说：“人类 ，可能还有别的灵长类雄性动物进化出低频声音，主要是为了威胁别的男性，而且让自己看上去更强大，更具威胁性“。他还说：“人类男性的这一特性意味身体攻击能力和威力，这些特性的竞争优势在战斗或者威胁别的男性的时，比在吸引女性的时候更多。”
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宾夕法尼亚立大学的研究们录音了多于500男性和女性对话。然后播放了录音给多于1100男性和女性听。男性志愿者听了录音，然后根据他们的感觉评价了每个男性的优劣。15个女性根据她感觉评价了同一男性的浪漫吸引力。男性也根据他们的感觉评价了女性的吸引力。大部分的男性认为录音上低频声音属于更有优势的男性。Puts博士说女性也喜欢低频声音，但是他还说女性的评价结果让他结论男性的声音音调对女性不是很重要。
The researchers at Penn State recorded more than 500 men and women speaking. 宾夕法尼亚立大 的研究员取錄五百多名男女的講話語气They then played the recordings back to more than 1,100 different people of both sexes. 然后重播於千一多个男女听者Male volunteers rated each male recording for levels of dominance they perceived in the voices. 男的自愿者以男性錄音察
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男性进化成出低频声音为了吓跑别的男性
科学家们发现了为什么有男性有特别低调的声音的原因。传统上，有人认为男性进化了出低频声音为了吸引女性。然而美国宾夕法尼亚州立大学的人类学家们认为男性进化为低频音是为了吓跑别的男性。研究者David Puts说：“人类 ，可能还有别的灵长类的男雄性进化出了低频声音主要地为了威胁别的男性，而且让自己好似似乎更高大也更恐吓。”他还说：“人类男性的特性意味身体攻击能力和威烈人类男性的这些特征使其更具攻击性与威摄性，这些特性的竞争优势在斗争或者威胁别的男性的时候比在吸引女性的时候更多。使其在与其它雄性竞争中更具优势，而非单纯为了吸引雌性。”宾夕法尼亚立大学的研究们录音了多于500多名男性和女性对话。然后播放了录音给多于1100多名男性和女性听。男性志愿者听了录音后，然后根据他们的感觉评价了每个男性的优劣。15个名女性根据她感觉评价了同一男性的浪漫吸引力。男性也根据他们的感觉评价了女性的吸引力。大部分的男性认为录音上低频声音属于更有优势的男性。Puts博士说女性也喜欢低频声音，但是他还说女性的评价结果让他结论男性的声音音调对女性不是很重要。Puts博士说，根据实验结果，虽然女性也喜欢低频声音，但男性声音对女性的吸引力是很有限的
From my prospective, you should not transtlate it word by word because the translation looks strange. You should establish the chinese sense.
have a nice learning experience :)
and hope you help me to correct my note.
Men Developed Deep Voices to Scare Other Men
Scientists have cast new light on why some men have deeper voices than others. It was traditionally thought that males developed a lower pitched voice to attract members of the opposite sex. However, anthropologists at the American college Penn State believe a deep voice was to scare off other males. Researcher David Puts said: "In humans, and possibly other primates too, a low pitched voice evolved primarily to intimidate other men…to make males seem bigger and scarier." He added that: "Human male traits imply physical aggression and formidability and seem to provide competitive advantages in fighting or threatening other men more than they help attract women."
The researchers at Penn State recorded more than 500 men and women speaking. They then played the recordings back to more than 1,100 different people of both sexes. Male volunteers rated each male recording for levels of dominance they perceived in the voices. The same recordings were rated by 15 female volunteers for romantic attractiveness. Men similarly rated the women's voices for attractiveness. Most of the men thought the lower-pitched male recordings belonged to a more dominant man. Dr Puts said women also liked lower-pitched voices, but the pattern of the women's ratings did not lead him to say that the deepness of the male voice was so important to females.
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