Marcos' biography
His name is Marcos .He was born in Mexico city on May 29 ,1993.
Currently he live with their Parents. His Parents’ name are George Martinez he is 43 years old and Marlen Tapia she is 42 years old and both are teacher in the high school.
Alex has 5 siblings he is older brother.
When Marcos was 5 he started to study in the kinder garden named: “ Miguel Hidalgo” He studied there for one year after Marcos got into the primary school named: ”Heroes de la Independencia”.He studied for 6 years. Marcos got a certified when finished Primary Education.
Marcos started studying the high school when he was 15.He studied three years and subsequently Marcos did an Exam to get into the University. He studied Language. He said “Studying languages you open new doors to meet world, people and so on.
He was studying English and French for 4 years and finally Marcos finished his career.
Now He is going to do his thesis to get the degree in Language.
Marcos really love learning languages now He want to learn Chinese Language because he thinks that China is a amazing country and a way to meet china firstly is necessary to learn Chinese language…
During his career Marcos made 3 friends. Marcos got well with them.
Together are going to plan to move another country.
To marry is not priority thinks Marcos, At the moment he is fighting for his dreams come true…
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Marcos' biography
His name is Marcos .He was born in Mexico city on May 29 ,1993.Currently he is living with his parents. His parents’ names are George Martinez and Marlen Tapia. He is 43 years old and she is 42 years old. Both are high school teachers.
Alex has 5 siblings and he is the oldest brother.
When Marcos was 5 he started to study in the kinder garden named “ Miguel Hidalgo”. He studied there for one year until Marcos got into the primary school named ”Heroes de la Independencia”. He studied there for 6 years. Marcos got a certified when he finished Primary Education.
Marcos started studying in high school when he was 15. He studied three years and subsequently Marcos did an exam to get into the University. He studied Language. He said “Studying languages enables you to open new doors to meet world, people and so on.
He studied English and French for 4 years and finally Marcos finished his career.
Now he is going to do his thesis to get the degree in Language.
Marcos really loves learning languages. Now, he wants to learn Chinese Language because he thinks that China is an amazing country and the best way to know China is to learn Chinese language…
During his career Marcos made 3 friends. Marcos got well with them.
They are going to plan to move to another country together.
Marriage is not a priority for Marcos; he is fighting at the moment so that his dreams can come true…
In yellow I underlined the mistakes. In blue I underlined some sentences that are more correct in that way. In dark blue I inderlined some things that sound better that way. If you have any doubts please don't hesitate to contact me :)
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Marcos' biography
His name is Marcos. He was born in Mexico city on May 29 ,1993.Currently he lives with his parents. His parents’ names are George Martinez (he is 43 years old) and Marlen Tapia (she is 42 years old), and both are teachers at the high school.
Alex has 5 siblings, and he is the oldest brother.
When Marcos was 5, he started to study at the Miguel Hidalgo kindergarten. He studied there for one year. After this, Marcos got into the 'Heroes de la Independencia' primary school. He studied for 6 years. Marcos got a certificate when he finished primary education.
Marcos started studying at the high school when he was 15.He studied there for three years and subsequently did an exam to get into University, where he studied Language. He said “studying languages you open new doors to meet the world, people and so on."
He studied English and French for 4 years and then finally finished his career.
Now he is going to do his thesis to get a degree in Language.
Marcos really loves learning languages now. He wants to learn the Chinese language because he thinks that China is a amazing country, as well as a way to visit China. However, firstly, it is necessary to learn the language…
During his career Marcos made 3 friends whom he got on well with.
Together they plan to move to another country.
'To marry is not a priority', thinks Marcos. At the moment he is fighting for his dreams to come true…
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