Hotel
My flight was landed in Beijing airport.
I went through the entry procedure.
I got my luggage and carried it to exit gate.
One man was waiting me while he held a paper written 'TECC' high.
I followed him who was Chinese driver.
His car was in parking lot. He put my luggage into truck.
He started for hotel. Normally it would take an hour to get there.
So I slept in a short time. When I was in flight, the flight was shaked a lot due to turbulence. I felt nervous.
I was tired but I couldn't sleep..
One of my staffs have stayed in advance since last week.
He welcomed me at hotel lobby.
I checked in and went to my room and arranged my luggage well and took some rest for a while.
When the day I arrived at destination was off, we would work from next day.
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Hotel
My flight landed in Beijing airport and I went through the entry procedures / customs. I then got / claimed my luggage and carried it to the exit gate. There. I saw a man who held a sign which read, "TECC high," so I approached / went over to him. He turned out to be my driver and had been sent to pick me up. He said hiscar was in the parking lot, lead me there, and once we reached it, he put my luggage into the trunk.
We then started off to the hotel. Since he told me that it usually takes an hour to get there, I decided to
sleep for a short time. I hadn't slept on the plane due to some major turbulence, which made me nervous, so I was awake throughout my flight. A member of my staff, who had been at the hotel since last week, met and welcomed me once I arrived in the hotel's lobby.
I checked in, went to my room, unpacked my luggage, and then relaxed for a while.
Since the day I arrived was not a work day, we did not need to start unti the next day.
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