can someone correct this for me please? Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing to enthusiastically apply for the role of graduate sales trainee. I will briefly highlight why my skills and experience match the position. One of the core competencies for this role is having experience working in customer service or a sales role. From my previous roles which were all customer focused, I developed the ability to provide excellent customer service with the use of excellent communication skills. I met and greeted customers in those roles and provided response to their quarries, as well as directing them to the relevant people when necessary. I am currently working as a sales associate for a company called American-Eagle-Outfitters. One of the chief responsibilities in my current role is to ensure that my team and I meet the needs of our customers, and to also exceed our daily sales target. Because of my eagerness to learn and succeed, I have been promoted twice in a period of seven months while working for my current employer. I enjoy working as a sales man not only because I enjoy talking to people, but also because of the satisfaction I get when I know that I have helped a client choose the right product. Of course, this role also requires someone who is not only educated to a degree level, but have also come out of university with excellent grades. I have recently just completed a degree in Sociology at the University of East London, in which I got a 2.1. During my time in university, I conducted numerous research using qualitative and quantitative methods. As a student, I also wrote numbers of essays and reports individually with little supervision from tutors/lecturers. This has enabled me to improve my research, writing and communication skills. Furthermore, I have excellent analytical skills, which I developed from using Ms Excel and SPSS. In conclusion, I am highly self-motivated, and I am committed to providing the best service to both colleagues and customers. I work well under pressure, and I adapt quickly to changing situation. Thank you for your time and consideration. I look forward to meeting with you to discuss my application further.