Gradution
Several days ago, I have just finished the College Entrance Examination. Well, when I was in the classroom during that time, writing papers together with some students from other schools, I was so nervous and a little upset. It means an end----an end of the life of my high school. You know,in China, Senior 3 isn't easy for each student. Some of my classmates even sacrifice their rest time, doing a pile of papers in midnight.
Anyway, no matter how hard it was, we finallly went through it.Now we have become gradutes. We have time to do what we like. Maybe go for a relaxing trip, or read books.And the life of high school will be transformed into a beautiful memory in my mind.
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Graduation
Several days ago, I have just finished took/sat a College Entrance Examination. Well, when I was in the classroom during that time, writing papers/essays together with some students from other schools, I was nervous and a little upset. It means an the end - the end of the life of my high school my time in high school. You know, in China, Senior 3 isn't easy for every student each student. Some of my classmates even sacrifice their rest free time, writing a pile of papers/essays until midnight.Anyway, no matter how hard it was, we finally did it went through it.Now we have become (high school) graduates. We have time to do what we like. Maybe we will go for a relaxing trip/Maybe we will go on holiday, or read books. And the life of high school my time in high school/my school days will become transformed into a beautiful memory in my mind.
Very well done! :)
Notes:
1. To sit an exam = To take an exam
2. 'Papers' is fine, but 'essays' or 'assignments' sounds better to my ear (in British English, at least).
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Graduation
Several days ago I have just finished the College Entrance Examination. Well, when I was in the classroom during that time, writing papers together with some students from other schools, I was so nervous and a little upset. It means it's the end----the end of my life at high school. You know, in China, Senior 3 isn't easy for every student. Some of my classmates even sacrifice their rest time, doing a pile of papers at midnight.Anyway, no matter how hard it was, we finally got through it. Now we have become graduates. We have time to do what we like. Maybe go for a relaxing trip or read books, and the life at high school will be transformed into a beautiful memory in my mind.
Congratulations on your accomplishment! All the best!
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恩恩，谢谢你的祝福
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同為一位高中畢業生，相信考試一定會有好結果並祝福假期愉快 ;)
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