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Having a Good Rest in a Flower It is an ordinary flower, so ordinary that nobody even knows it' s name. People only know this type of lowers can be found everywhere either on the ridge of fields or the bank of ponds when it blooms at spring. It's colour is between white and red, simple but graceful. It's fragrance is faint but enchantingly. It' s not too big, almost has the same size with a baby' s little fist, but adorable. The little bee is having a good rest quietly in the centre of the flower without moving. It seems the little creature is having a sweet dream so it didn't sense the soft kiss of breezes. The bee choose the flower to respite, could it be that it knows he should leave his soul in a fragrant and undefiled place? one beauty is set off by the other one mutually while the bee is sleeping quietly in the flower, whIch looks just like a perfect picture of still lives.It is really unnecessary to chase a huge and grand place for the soul to respite, what we need is a fragrant and undefiled flower. It's the only place where the soul will fall asleep quietly, keeping itself away form evil and danger, obtaining endless strength, courage and faith, thus moving forwards in life confidently.(please correct my essay, thanks!)

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Having a Good Resting in a Flower

It There is an ordinary flower, so ordinary that nobody even knows it' s name. People only know This type of flower can be found anywhere. either on the ridges of fields or the banks of ponds. When it blooms in spring, it's color ranges from white to red. It is simple and graceful. It's fragrance is faint and enchanting. It' s not very big, almost the same size as a baby' s fist. It is quite adorable.

A little bee is having a good resting quietly in the center of the flower without moving. It seems the little creature is having a sweet dream so it doesn't sense the soft kiss of the breeze. The bee choose the flower to respite,  (This has already been mentioned above)Could it be that he knows he should leave his soul in a fragrant and undefiled place?

One beauty is set off by the other. one mutually While the bee is sleeping quietly in the flower, whIch it looks just like a perfect picture of still lives(maybe you could say a picture of serenity.). It is unnecessary to chase after a huge and grand place for the soul to find relief. All we need is a fragrant and undefiled flower. It's the only place where the soul will fall asleep quietly, keeping itself away form evil and danger, obtaining endless strength, courage and faith, thus moving forward in life confidently.


(Respite is not used in everyday language. You will here rest or relief more commonly :P)
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lol, actually, i am a night bird sometimes. ^^
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I would rather be a bee than a man~~~~~~~~~~~~ Your know many works that I didn't meet before. Learning from you. " It's fragrance is faint but enchantingly" It's ------Its" BTW, you are a night bird or a early bird?

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