[urusaikidd's correction is perfectly fine, so I'm just going to suggest a few alternatives]

My English Diary 6.16 2016 (No.2)

Today's The teacher today was a very funny guy from Canada.
He came from Canada.
He said " I will have told us that he was having a BBQ party at the near Tokyo station.
so I will participate in plan on going to the BBQ -- that way,
I can practice speaking English with various people.
I'm looking forward to this weekend.


Thank you for reading.
おやすみなさい。

I agree with urusaikidd -- be sure to practice your English. It will surely be intimidating, especially if there are a lot of native English speakers, but don't let that put you off. Good luck, and most of all, have fun!

My English Diary 6.16.2016 (No.2)

I went to English school today for the third time.
Today's teacher, who came from Canada, was very funny guy.
He told us, "I will have BBQ party at the near Tokyo station," so I plan to attend it / on attending it.
Then, I can practice English with various people, so I really look forward to this weekend..
From today's class, I still remember the wonderful phrase that my friend told me, "Beauty is in the eye of the beholder."

Thank you.
おやすみなさい。

 

Good job! A BBQ party sounds fun, I hope that you enjoy yourself, but be sure to practice your English! As to your writing, learn more vocabulary so you can compose better, more descriptive sentences, or, simply join the smaller ones together (similar as to how I have done above). Keep writing and keep posting! J.