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The first day in my college I'm so lucky that I have this chance back to school to have a further study. I aspect so many things which I am interested just in the first day.I'll encourage myself to be optimistic as much as I can. the confidence seems to reach into my soul . I have my long purpose today's struggle in order to a high paying job .because the society need people who have a special ability so I want be a person like that! just one year! I have my own value system so I'm not give up my heart . In a word ,now I'm thirst after knowledge and I' m full of dreams and hopes . I hope in the days my family and I have a high happiness life level!!

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You could say 'My first day of college'

I'm so lucky that I have this chance to go back to school to have a  for further studies. I already aspect see so many things which I am interested just in on the first day. I'll encourage myself to be as optimistic as much  as I can be. TheConfidence seems to reach into my soul.

I have my long purpose today's struggle in order to a high paying job . I have a purpose in mind. Todays struggles will bring a high paying job! Because the society needs people who have a special ability skills, so I want be a person like thatposses them in just one year!

I have my own values system so I'm not won't give up my heart .

In a word ,Right now I'm thirsting after knowledge. and I'm full of dreams and hopes.

I hope in the days future my family and I have a high abundant happiness and a rich life level!!



PS I noticed when you type you dont put the period in the right place.  It needs to go right after the last word of the sentence. You can put a space AFTER but not BEFORE the period.  :D

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nice dream, hope u can do it!

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