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What make you watch a TV show ? I am not a fan of TV shows. I used to watch it when I was young, but now I don't find it as much attractive as used to in the past. However, everybody is about TV shows. It is often a topic of conversation. So I give it a new try last week end. I've started to watch The walking dead. I have to say I had a blast. I watched the entire season 1 on Sunday afternoon and I am already at the episode 7 of season 2. I don't know exactly how the writers do to keep me such in suspense. The walking dead is not really a topic I am interesting in but it finally works on me. Do you think watching TV show is a waste of time ? I like to think it improves my English skills.

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What makes you watch a TV show ?

I am not a fan of TV shows. I used to watch them it when I was young, but now I don't find it as appealing much attractive as it used to be. in the past.
However, everybody is about TV shows***. It is often a topic of conversation. So I gave give it another new try last weekend. I've started to watch The Walking Dead. I have to say I really enjoyed it. I had a blast. I watched the entire season 1 on Sunday afternoon and I am already on at the episode 7 of season 2.
I don't know exactly what how the writers do to keep me in such in suspense. The Walking Dead is not really a topic I am interested interesting in but it finally worked for on me. Do you think watching TV shows is a waste of time ? I like to think it improves my English skills.

***This sentence isn't necessarily wrong, but I'm not sure if you meant to use it because it is used very informally in spoken conversation. You could say for example: People are all about their TV shows (which means they really enjoy their TV shows). If that's what you meant, then good job! Though I don't know that it really works here. You could say rather: Everybody is really into their TV shows.

Mais bien fait! :)

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What makes you watch a TV show ?

I am not a fan of TV shows. I used to watch it them when I was young, but now I don't find them it as much attractive as I used to in the past. However, nowadays, everybody is all about TV shows. It is, often a topic of conversation. So, I gave it another new try, last week end. I've started to watch 'The walking dead'. I have to say that I had a blast. I watched the entire season 1 on Sunday afternoon and I am already at the episode 7 of season 2. I don't know exactly know how the writers do to keep me in such in suspense. The walking dead is not really a topic I am interested in but it finally works on me. Do you think that watching a TV show is a waste of time? I like to think that it improves my English skills.

 

Lovely write up, just a few minor errors. Keep practicing =)

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What makes you watch a TV show ? (It might be better to say: What makes a TV show enjoyable? or What makes a TV show good?)

I am not a fan of TV shows television. I used to watch it when I was young, but now I don't find it as much attractive as I used to in the past. However, everybody else is about loves TV shows (or: Everybody else is crazy about television). It is often a topic of conversation. So I give gave it a new another try last week end weekend. I've started to watch The Walking Dead. I have to say I must admit I had a blast. I watched the entire season 1 all of Season 1 (or: the entire first season) on Sunday afternoon and I am already at on the episode 7th episode of season 2.


I don't know exactly know how the writers do to keep me such in suspense. The Walking Dead is not really a topic I am interesting in, but it finally works on me (This sounds a little strange. Because the name of the TV show is The Walking Dead, it'd be better to be more specific and say "zombies" or "the undead". How about, "Zombies/The undead are not really a topic I find that interesting in real life, but somehow I love it when I watch that show"). Do you think watching TV shows is a waste of time ? I like to think it improves my English skills.

Good job! ^-^ This was very good. Keep up the good work!

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What makes you watch a TV show?

I am not a fan of TV shows. I used to watch TV when I was young, but now I don't find it as appealing as it used to be in the past.
However, everybody is all about watching TV shows. It is often a frequent topic of conversation. So I gave it a new try last weekend. I've started to watch The Walking Dead. I have to say, I had a blast. I watched the entire first season on Sunday afternoon and I am already at the episode 7 of season 2.
I don't know exactly how the writers do to keep me such in suspense. Zombies are not really a topic I am interesting in, but it actually works for me. Do you think watching TV (shows) is a waste of time ? I like to think it improves my English skills.


Good Job!

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I certainly don't think that watching tv has to be a waste of time. Many people feel that television causes people to lose interest in reality and causes your attention span to get shorter, but one of the things I love to do with my family is watch tv shows and movies together. After the show is over, we will often discuss and analyze the characters and plot lines of the stories and try to learn from the lessons we see played out through the seasons. Television can be mindless entertainment, but it certainly doesn't have to be! I'm glad that you enjoyed the Walking Dead Chloe, just wait until you get through season 2! The action really picks up after that! haha

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