English abstract for my graduation project.
Hello everyone, I will graduate this year and I'm finalizing the writing of my graduation project. The document is written in french but I need to present an abstract in english. As my english writting skills are not that good it would be great if you could help me correcting it. Thanks in adavance.
"This work deals with the design of a warehouse in order to help the pharmaceutical company “El Kendi” in its decision concerning the adoption of a centralized storage policy in the coming years. An optimal design will be proposed, according to the constraints imposed by the company, covering the best the estimated need for future storage. The logistical and operational cost associated with this warehouse will be estimated and compared with the same estimated costs associated with decentralized warehouses currently used. The payback time on the investment will also be estimated. Thereafter, the interests of the company to centralize its storage function will be presented.
This work will be completed by proposals for sizing that require greater investment but allow better optimization of the storage capacity. "
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English abstract for my graduation project.
Hello everyone, I will graduate this year and I'm finalizing the writing of my graduation project. The document is written in french but I need to present an abstract in english. As my english writting skills are not that good it would be great if you could help me correcting it. Thanks in adavance."This work deals with the design of a warehouse to help the pharmaceutical company "El Kendi” concerning the adoption of a centralized storage policy in the coming years. A design will be proposed, according to the constraints imposed by the company, optimally covering the estimated need for future storage. The logistical and operational cost associated with this warehouse will be compared with the estimated costs associated with the decentralized warehouses currently in use.The payback time on the investment will also be estimated. Also, interests of the company to centralize its storage function will be presented.
This work will be completed by proposing sizing that requires greater investment, but allow better optimization of the storage capacity. "
Thanks for reading :) I hope you'll correct it :D
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English abstract for my graduation project.
Hello everyone, I will graduate this year and I'm finalizing the writing text of my graduation project. The document is written in french but I need to present an abstract in English. As my English writing skills are not that good, it would be great if you could help to correct them (or it -- are you talking about the skills or the abstract?) me correcting it. Thanks in advance."This work relates to deals with the design of a warehouse design in order that will to help the pharmaceutical company “El Kendi” in its decision concerning the adoption of a centralized storage policy in the coming years. An optimal A design will be proposed, according to the constraints imposed by the company, that optimally addresses covering the best the estimated need for future storage. The logistical and operational costs associated with this warehouse will be estimated and compared with the same estimated costs associated with the decentralized warehouses currently used. The amount of time it takes to payback the payback time on the investment will also be estimated. Thereafter, the interests of the company to centralize its storage function will be presented. (more just my own opinion that you don't need this sentence).
This work will further include be completed by sizing proposals for sizing that requiring greater investment, but which would allow for better optimization of the storage capacity. " (I am not sure I 100% understood the content of this sentence though...)
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English abstract for my graduation project.
Hello everyone, I will graduate this year and I'm finalizing the writing of my graduation project. The document is written in french but I need to present an abstract in english. As my english writting skills are not that good it would be great if you could help me correcting it. Thanks in adavance."This work deals with the design of a warehouse in order to help the pharmaceutical company “El Kendi” in its decision concerning the adoption of a centralized storage policy. in the coming years. An optimal design will be proposed according to the constraints imposed by the company and covering the best the estimated need for future storage. The logistical and operational cost associated with this warehouse will be estimated. They will be compared with the same estimated costs associated with decentralized warehouses currently used. The payback time on the investment will also be estimated. Thereafter, the interests of the company to centralize its storage function will be presented.This work will be completed by proposals for sizing that require greater investment but allow better optimization of the storage capacity. "
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Hello
everyone, I’ll be graduating this year and I'm currently adding the finishing
touches to my graduation project (when you say “my graduation project” do you
mean “my thesis” ? If so substitute)
However, while I am writing the thesis/project in French, an abstract written in English will need to be presented, too. Unfortunately, my academic writing skills in English are not as good as they might need to be so I was hoping someone might help me correct the abstract for any errors or even suggest more academically appropriate lexico-grammatical alternatives. Thanks in advance.
The El-Kendi pharmaceutical company is currently in the process of adopting a centralised warehousing and storage policy. Although this involved notable investment, it will also lead to the optimization of storage. The aim of this project/thesis is to design a warehouse that will meet the company’s requirements over the coming years. Thus, the proposed design will adhere to the storage specifications provided by the company and will also include a detailed comparison of the operational and logistic costs between this future centralised warehousing policy and the current decentralised one. Payback time on investment will also be estimated, with a detailed report being presented on why it is in the interests of the company to continue its pursue and investment in a centralised warehousing policy.
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