An environment issue in my hometown
There is a large amount of rubbish and waste that is discarded in the environment in my hometown each day. Especially, areas near traditional markets have heaps pf garbage with a lot of kinds of rubbish such as leftover food, packages and other things that make the streets dirty and smelly. It creates favourable conditions to help insects multiply such as flies and mosquitoes. That is one of the reasons for dangerous illness such as cholera. Besides that sewerage is not managed. in another way, it doesn't be constructed well therefore sometimes waste water floods the streets side that causes the polluted atmosphere and water
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An environmental issue in my hometown
There is a large amount of rubbish and waste that is discarded into the environment in my hometown each day. The areas around traditional markets have heaps of garbage from leftover food, as well as a lot of commercial rubbish such as packaging, containers and discarded items. All of these things combine to make the streets both dirty and extremely unpleasant smelling. Furthermore, due to poor construction and drainage issues, sewage and waste water often flood the side streets and remain unattended. These unsanitary conditions help insects such as flies and mosquitoes multiply and, in turn, set the stage for dangerous illnesses such as Dengue fever and cholera.Good job! I understood everything that you wanted to convey. Your ideas were great, but in organizing them into sentences, they jumped around and were not in logical order. I did so above albeit poorly! Also, you have no ending to your story! Tell us what you think should be done. As to English, improving your vocabulary will help you with your sentence construction, so learn more words and then practice your writing. J.
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An environment issue in my hometown
There is a large amount of rubbish and waste that is discarded in the environment in my hometown each day. Especially, areas near traditional markets have heaps pf garbage with a lot of kinds of rubbish such as leftover food, packages and other things that make the streets dirty and smelly. It creates favourable conditions to help insects multiply such as flies and mosquitoes. That is one of the reasons for dangerous illness such as cholera. Besides that sewerage is not managed. in another way, it doesn't be constructed well therefore sometimes waste water floods the streets side that causes the polluted atmosphere and water.Every day, there is a large amount of rubbish and waste are being left in the surrounding of my hometown. Especially in crowded areas like traditional markets, heaps of garbage are messed consisting of leftover foods, packaging materials etc which are making the streets dirty and smelly. These activities have created favorable condition for different mircroorganisms and insects such as flies and mosquitoes to grow, ultimately increasing the prevalence of life-threatening diseases like cholera. Besides that the improper management of sewage is also contributing to environmental pollution. Sometimes, the sewage leaks and floods in the street causing pollution in the atmosphere and water resources.
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