My nieghborhood
My nieghborhood is big place and crowded . It has great musqe and nice garden . I go to with my nieghbors to shopping . I love my nieghborhood becuse birth place and has my family . Jeust [emoji][emoji]☺️
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My nieghborhood
My nieghborhood is big place and crowded . It has great musqe and nice garden. I go to with my nieghbors to shopping . I love my nieghborhood becuse birth place and has my family . Jeust [emoji][emoji]☺️Let me correct this.
My neighborhood is a big place and is crowded. It has great music and beautiful gardens. I go shopping with my neighbors. I love my neighborhood because it is my birthplace and my family lives there.
Notes;
"nice garden" - you could have written "a nice garden", but it is better to use a more descriptive word like "beautiful". I also assumed that there was more than one garden, so I wrote "beautiful gardens".
"because birth place" is better written as "because it is my birthplace".
"and has my family" is OK, but "my family lives there" is much more idiomatic.
Good job, though, and keep on writing.
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