#2 My Saturday - A rainy day (Please correct me) Well, In this time I want to share with your two shorts paragraph I wrote for my virtual English course. Thanks you for your corrections. The first paragraph is about one Saturday in my life. On Saturday I usually get up late, between 10 at 11 am. I have breakfast, a cup of chocolate, some bread and a scramble eggs. Then I take a shower. In the afternoon I meet with my friends and we do something fun, We go to the cinema, eat something or dance in the night. At night I go to the bed later, about 11 at 12 pm. The second paragraph I should imagine I was a reporter and I had to describe how was the park. Today In the park of Formosa is raining so strong. The people are running for your houses or are staying in the stores while the rain stop. Some kids are playing in the park and their parents are screaming for stop. Some lovers are walking under the rain with a umbrella. The most of people are traveling in cars and bus. I appreciate your corrections.