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Please, I would like corrected this text that a friend will submit for her English exam:
> Would someone please correct this text that a friend of mine will later submit for her English exam ?
On my last night out, I went with my boyfriend to a restaurant. We ate pizza and pasta. I liked to the pizza because it had cheese, tomato, bacon and meat. I liked to the pulp? because it had tomato and cheese. It was my favorite food.
I wore a black blouse with a white skirt, and black shoes. I wore a bracelet, a handbag, a necklace and (a pair of )earrings. I also carried a handbag .
My boyfriend wore a gray suit and black shoes. I too wore a belt and a tie too.
In the restaurant, we were enjoyed ourselves a lot because my boyfriend and I talked about a lot of interesting things.
After that, we went to a cinema to watch a horror film.
We saw, I did not like a horror film saw Because I was bad. , Although, my boyfriend Knew That I did not like but I liked a horror film for her is excited Because. XXX > Dont understand you .
> My boyfriend chose a horror film for us to watch even though my boyfriend knew that I do not like this type of movie . He just want to get me excited.
After to the cinema, we went to a pub.
I drank a beer and I drank cokes I drove the car Because.XXX
> He drank beer but I drank coke , because I am driving
We danced and sang; and we were very happy and laughing a lot .
And how she could say that she spends so very wrong with scary movies? It's correct like this?XX
> I dont understand at all
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