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My friend asked me to correct Please, I would like corrected this text that a friend will submit for her English exam:  "In my last night out, i went with my boyfriend to the restaurant. We ate pizza and pasta. I liked to the pizza Because It had cheese, tomato, bacon and meat. I liked to the pulp Because It had tomato and cheese. It was my favorite food. I wore a black blouse, a white skirt and black shoes. I wore a bracelet, a handbag, a necklace and earrings. My boyfriend wore a gray suit and black shoes. I too wore a belt and a tie. In the restaurant, we were very funny Because my boyfriend and I Told to every things. After We went to the cinema, a horror film We saw, I did not like a horror film saw Because I was bad. , Although, my boyfriend Knew That I did not like but I liked a horror film for her is excited Because. After to the cinema, We went to the pub. I drank a beer and I drank cokes I drove the car Because. We danced and sang and we were very happy and funny ". And how she could say that she spends so very wrong with scary movies? It's correct like this?

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My friend asked me to correct

Please, I would like corrected this text that a friend will submit for her English exam:

> Would someone please correct this text that a friend of mine will later submit for her English exam ?


 On my last night out, I went with my boyfriend to a restaurant. We ate pizza and pasta. I liked to the pizza because it had cheese, tomato, bacon and meat. I liked to the pulp? because it had tomato and cheese. It was my favorite food.

I wore a black blouse with a white skirt, and black shoes. I wore a bracelet, a handbag, a necklace and (a pair of )earrings. I also carried a handbag .

My boyfriend wore a gray suit and black shoes. I too wore a belt and a tie too.

In the restaurant, we were enjoyed ourselves a lot because my boyfriend and I talked about a lot of interesting things.

After that, we went to a cinema to watch a horror film.

We saw, I did not like a horror film saw Because I was bad. , Although, my boyfriend Knew That I did not like but I liked a horror film for her is excited Because. XXX > Dont understand you .

> My boyfriend chose a horror film for us to watch even though my boyfriend knew that I do not like this type of movie . He just want to get me excited.

After to the cinema, we went to a pub.

I drank a beer and I drank cokes I drove the car Because.XXX

> He drank beer but I drank coke , because I am driving

 

We danced and sang; and we were very happy and laughing a lot .

And how she could say that she spends so very wrong with scary movies? It's correct like this?XX

> I dont understand at all

 

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