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History is truly fascinating
History has always been one of my favorite subjects since my school days. As I do love watching documentaries, whenever I can, I watch historical documentaries on YouTube, as well as read about things related to history on the Internet. Speaking of which, yesterday I saw a documentary about the Chinese Empire, the only empire that existed for 4 millennia. Even though the Chinese Empire was outstanding because of its great buildings/structures, like The Great Wall of China and The Forbidden City, such buildings/structures cost many people their lives. (Sounds more natural.)
One of the fascinating things about history in my opinion are the Ancient Civilizations, such as Egyptians, Greeks, Romans, Persians and so forth. Many of them contributed a lot with their rich cultures to our western culture. Hence, I think people should make time to get to know more about the roots of our culture. Have you ever thought about what the world would be like if the Greeks had lost the Battle of Salamis to the Persians?! Obviously, the world would be quite different than the one we know now.
We use the word 'construction' more for the process of building, and the word 'building' for something that's finished:
The construction of the museum will take 5 years and cost $50 million.
The building was constructed over 500 years ago.
You can think deeply about something, but with know (and learn), it's more common just to use more (about).
You wrote very well, congratulations!
History is truly fascinating
History has always been one of my favorite subjects since my school days. I love watching documentaries. Whenever I can, I watch historical documentaries on YouTube, as well as read about things related to history on the Internet. Speaking of which, yesterday I saw a documentary about the Chinese Empire, the only impire that existed for 4 millennia. Even though the Chinese Empire is outstanding because of its national heritage, like The Great Wall of China and The Forbidden City, such constructions were built at the cost of many people's lives.One of the fascinating things about history, in my opinion, are the ancient civilizations, such as the Egyptians, Greeks, Romans, Persians and so on. Many of them contributed a lot of their rich cultures to our occidental culture. Therefore, I think people should make time to learn about the roots of our culture. Have you ever thought about what the world would be like if the Greeks had lost the Battle of Salamis to the Persians?! Obviously, the world would be quite different than the one we know now.
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