30天中文写作挑战 (10/30) – 法国的医疗保险
在法国有一个公共医疗保险，叫"Sécurité sociale"。
每月，国家拿一部分工人的待遇，为了基金保健。
因而，在生病的时候，看病很便宜。
并且，多数药实报实销。
因为一个人不选他的健康，所以我觉得很好意思。
我在美国的时候，我恐怕生病了，因为美国的医生很贵， 所以我不曾看了。
可是法国人们也应该有一个私人保险，因为有的东西不偿还，比如呀医还是眼科医生。
每法国公司对他的工人得建议私人保险。
10 days passed, 20 more to go! Thank you in advance for your precious help. Here is the English version in case my saying is not clear enough :
In France there is a public medical insurance, called “Sécurité sociale”. Each month, the state takes a part of the workers’ salary in order to fund healthcare. Therefore, when you get sick, going to see a doctor is very cheap. Moreover, most medicines are reimbursed. Because someone cannot choose his health, I think it is a very good idea. When I was in the USA, I was afraid to fell ill, because US doctors are very expensive, so I never went to see one. But French people also need to take a private insurance, because some of the things are not reimbursed, for example dentists or eye doctors. Each French company must propose its workers a private health insurance.
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30天中文写作挑战 (10/30) – 法国的医疗保险
(在)法国有一个公共医疗保险，叫"Sécurité sociale"。每(個)月，国家拿一部分工人(人民)的待遇(薪水/工資)，(作)为了基金保健(保健基金)。
因而(/因此)，在生病的时候，看病很便宜。(Here you don't need to write 生病的時候)
并且(/而且)，多数药(費)实报实销。
因为一个人不选他的健康(無法決定他是否生病)，所以我觉得(這是一個)很好意思(的主意)。
(我)在美国的时候，我恐(害)怕生病了，因为美国的医生(看病)很贵， 所以我不曾看(看醫生/看病)了。
(The doctor is not for sale)
可是法国人们也应该(需要)有(一个)私人保险，因为有的东西(醫療項目)不(能)偿还(報銷/退款)，比如呀(牙)医还(或)是眼科医生。(Better to use the specific term than just using the word "thing")
每法国公司(法國每間公司)对他的工人得建议私人保险(都得提供員工私人保險的選擇)。
(according to English below, I suppose it's not "advise/recommend" rather than an options of private health insurance for employees. 建議 means "advise/recommend".)
(法國每間公司 means "every company in France"; 每間法國公司 means "every french company")
Hope it helps ! Cheers.
10 days passed, 20 more to go! Thank you in advance for your precious help. Here is the English version in case my saying is not clear enough :
In France there is a public medical insurance, called “Sécurité sociale”. Each month, the state takes a part of the workers’ salary in order to fund healthcare. Therefore, when you get sick, going to see a doctor is very cheap. Moreover, most medicines are reimbursed. Because someone cannot choose his health, I think it is a very good idea. When I was in the USA, I was afraid to fell ill, because US doctors are very expensive, so I never went to see one. But French people also need to take a private insurance, because some of the things are not reimbursed, for example dentists or eye doctors. Each French company must propose its workers a private health insurance.
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30天中文写作挑战 (10/30) – 法国的医疗保险
在法国有一个公共医疗保险，叫"Sécurité sociale"。每月，国家拿一部分工人的待遇 （工资），为了基金保健（提供资金）。
因而 （因此），在生病的时候，看病很便宜。
并且，多数药实报实销。
因为一个人不（能）选他的健康，所以我觉得很好意思 （这是一个好主意）
我在美国的时候，我恐怕 （害怕）生病了，因为美国的医生很贵， 所以我不曾 （this word is not grammatically wrong,but i think it's more like written/literary language,"从未"or"从没" is better. ）看了 （看过）。
可是法国人们也应该有一个私人保险，因为有的东西不偿还 （报销），比如呀医 （牙医）还是 （还有）眼科医生。
每（个）法国公司（都必须）对他的工人得建议私人保险。
10 days passed, 20 more to go! Thank you in advance for your precious help. Here is the English version in case my saying is not clear enough :
In France there is a public medical insurance, called “Sécurité sociale”. Each month, the state takes a part of the workers’ salary in order to fund healthcare. Therefore, when you get sick, going to see a doctor is very cheap. Moreover, most medicines are reimbursed. Because someone cannot choose his health, I think it is a very good idea. When I was in the USA, I was afraid to fell ill, because US doctors are very expensive, so I never went to see one. But French people also need to take a private insurance, because some of the things are not reimbursed, for example dentists or eye doctors. Each French company must propose its workers a private health insurance.
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30天中文写作挑战 (10/30) – 法国的医疗保险
在法国有一个公共医疗保险，叫"Sécurité sociale"。每月，国家拿一部分工人的待遇，为了来作为保健基金。
因而，在生病的时候，看病很便宜。
并且，多数药费实报实销。
因为有些人在某些情况下不能选择他的健康，所以我觉得这是个好意思主意。
（“Because someone cannot choose his health, I think it is a very good idea. ”I can't grasp your meaning clearly. Maybe you mean someone is too poor to afford the medicine, so you think public medical insurance is a good idea for health care .）
我在美国的时候，我恐怕害怕生病了，因为美国的医生很贵， 所以我从来都不曾看了。
可是法国人们也应该需要有一个私人保险，因为有的东西不偿还报销，比如看牙医呀医或者还是看眼科医生。
每间法国公司必须建议对他的工人得建议买私人保险。
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30天中文写作挑战 (10/30) – 法国的医疗保险
在法国有一个公共医疗保险，叫"Sécurité sociale"。每月，国家拿一部分工人的待遇，为了 用于基金保健
并且，多数药实报实销。
因为一个人不能选他的健康，所以我觉得很好意思是个好主意。
（Im sorry，I cannot understand your means。I think your means is 因为一个人能够选择他的健康Because someone cannot choose his health）
我在美国的时候，我恐怕害怕生病了，因为美国的医生很贵， 所以我不曾从不看了医生。
可是法国人们也应该仍需要有一个私人保险，因为有的东西不偿还报销，比如呀牙医还是或是眼科医生。
每个法国公司必须对他的工人得建议私人保险。
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