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30天中文写作挑战 (9/30) – 在鼎泰豐吃了 当我在台湾，我发现了鼎泰豐。鼎泰豐是很有名的饭馆。 哪里的风味是小笼包。小笼包是包跟猪肉和汤填。真好吃！ 很我的父母在鼎泰豐里，一个服务员告诉了我们鼎泰豐的厨师准备小笼包以前应该练习两年。 客户们可以看看他们做饭。我觉得他们是最好的厨师！ 在鼎泰豐里，我也喜欢蟹粉小笼包、虾肉蒸饺、虾仁蛋炒饭和麻酱面。 在台北出的时候， 我在鼎泰豐要吃，慢慢吃！ Hi, today is day 9 of my challenge, thank you for all the people that help me go through it! Today I am talking a bit about my culinary experience in Taiwan. I would be very happy if you could take some time to look at it :) Below the English version : When I was in Taiwan, I discover Din Tai Fung. Din Tai Fung is a very famous restaurant. Their specialties are Xiao Long Bao. Xiao Long Bao are dumplings filled with pork and soup. It’s really good! When I was in Din Tai Fung with my parents, one of the waiters explained us that chef should practice during two years before making Xiao Long Bao. The customers could watch them prepare the food. I think that they are great chefs! In Din Tai Fung, I also like to eat Crab Xiao Long Bao, shrimp steamed dumplings, shrimp fried rice with eggs and sesame noodles. The next time I will return to Taipei, I want to eat at Ding Tai Fung. Enjoy your meal!

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我在臺灣的時候/ 時，發現了ㄧ間很有名的餐廳-鼎泰豐。

店內的招牌是包豬肉和湯汁的小籠包。很好吃/ 很美味！

那時候我跟父母一起在鼎泰豐裡，一個服務員/ 服務生 告訴我們，在鼎泰豐的廚師，須要 經過/ 歷經 兩年的練習，才能作小籠包。

在那裡，消費者可以看著他們作菜。我覺得他們是最好的廚師！

另外，我也喜歡鼎泰豐的蟹粉小籠包、蝦肉蒸餃、蝦仁蛋炒飯和麻醬面。

(下次)我再回到台北的時候/ 時，我想要再去鼎泰豐用餐，享受佳肴/ 美食！

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30天中文写作挑战 (9/30) – 在鼎泰豐用餐

当我在台湾的时候，我发现了“鼎泰豐”。鼎泰豐是一间很有名的饭馆。
那里的风味是小笼包。小笼包里面包了猪肉和汤填。真好吃！
和我的父母在鼎泰豐的时候，一个服务员告诉我们鼎泰豐的厨师准备做小笼包以前应该练习两年。
客户们可以看看他们做饭。我觉得他们是最好的厨师！
在鼎泰豐里，我还喜欢蟹粉小笼包、虾肉蒸饺、虾仁蛋炒饭和麻酱面。
下次来到台北的时候， 我还要在鼎泰豐吃，慢慢吃！



Hi, today is day 9 of my challenge, thank you for all the people that help me go through it! Today I am talking a bit about my culinary experience in Taiwan. I would be very happy if you could take some time to look at it :) Below the English version :

When I was in Taiwan, I discover Din Tai Fung. Din Tai Fung is a very famous restaurant. Their specialties are Xiao Long Bao. Xiao Long Bao are dumplings filled with pork and soup. It’s really good! When I was in Din Tai Fung with my parents, one of the waiters explained us that chef should practice during two years before making Xiao Long Bao. The customers could watch them prepare the food. I think that they are great chefs! In Din Tai Fung, I also like to eat Crab Xiao Long Bao, shrimp steamed dumplings, shrimp fried rice with eggs and sesame noodles. The next time I will return to Taipei, I want to eat at Ding Tai Fung. Enjoy your meal!
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30天中文写作挑战 (9/30) – 在鼎泰豐吃了

当我在台湾時，我发现了鼎泰豐。鼎泰豐是間很有名的饭馆。
哪里的风味他們的名菜是小笼包，。小笼包是裡面包的是跟猪肉和汤頭填。真好吃！
很和我的父母在鼎泰豐里時，一个服务员告诉了我们鼎泰豐的厨师在包准备小笼包以前应该要练习两年。
客人户们可以看看他们做饭。我觉得他们是最好的厨师！
在鼎泰豐里，我也喜欢蟹粉小笼包、虾肉蒸饺、虾仁蛋炒饭和麻酱面。
下次在再去台北出的时候， 我還要吃在鼎泰豐要吃，慢慢吃！



Hi, today is day 9 of my challenge, thank you for all the people that help me go through it! Today I am talking a bit about my culinary experience in Taiwan. I would be very happy if you could take some time to look at it :) Below the English version :

When I was in Taiwan, I discover Din Tai Fung. Din Tai Fung is a very famous restaurant. Their specialties are Xiao Long Bao. Xiao Long Bao are dumplings filled with pork and soup. It’s really good! When I was in Din Tai Fung with my parents, one of the waiters explained us that chef should practice during two years before making Xiao Long Bao. The customers could watch them prepare the food. I think that they are great chefs! In Din Tai Fung, I also like to eat Crab Xiao Long Bao, shrimp steamed dumplings, shrimp fried rice with eggs and sesame noodles. The next time I will return to Taipei, I want to eat at Ding Tai Fung. Enjoy your meal!
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30天中文写作挑战 (9/30) – 在鼎泰豐吃了

当我在台湾时，我发现了鼎泰豐。鼎泰豐是很有名的饭馆。
那里的特色是小笼包。小笼包包着猪肉和汤。真好吃！
和我的父母在鼎泰豐里时，一个服务员告诉我们鼎泰豐的厨师包小笼包以前应该先练习两年。
客户们可以看他们做饭。我觉得他们是最好的厨师！
在鼎泰豐里，我也喜欢蟹粉小笼包、虾肉蒸饺、虾仁蛋炒饭和麻酱面。
再到台北去的时候， 我还要在鼎泰豐吃，慢慢吃！



Hi, today is day 9 of my challenge, thank you for all the people that help me go through it! Today I am talking a bit about my culinary experience in Taiwan. I would be very happy if you could take some time to look at it :) Below the English version :

When I was in Taiwan, I discover Din Tai Fung. Din Tai Fung is a very famous restaurant. Their specialties are Xiao Long Bao. Xiao Long Bao are dumplings filled with pork and soup. It’s really good! When I was in Din Tai Fung with my parents, one of the waiters explained us that chef should practice during two years before making Xiao Long Bao. The customers could watch them prepare the food. I think that they are great chefs! In Din Tai Fung, I also like to eat Crab Xiao Long Bao, shrimp steamed dumplings, shrimp fried rice with eggs and sesame noodles. The next time I will return to Taipei, I want to eat at Ding Tai Fung. Enjoy your meal!
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当我在台湾，我发现了鼎泰豐。鼎泰豐是很有名的饭馆。
哪里的风味是小笼包。小笼包是包跟猪肉和汤填。真好吃！
很我的父母在鼎泰豐里，一个服务员告诉了我们鼎泰豐的厨师准备小笼包以前应该练习两年。
客户们可以看看他们做饭。我觉得他们是最好的厨师！
在鼎泰豐里，我也喜欢蟹粉小笼包、虾肉蒸饺、虾仁蛋炒饭和麻酱面。
在台北出的时候， 我在鼎泰豐要吃，慢慢吃！

当我还在台湾的时候，我发现了一个很有名的饭馆，名叫

鼎泰豐。

那儿的特色是小笼包，里面装满了肉和汤汁，真是美味极了！
当我和我的父母在那儿用餐的时候，一名（Tu peux aussi utiliser "位" ici）服务员告诉我们，厨师们为了做出这样美味的小笼包，要做两年的学徒。
食客们可以观看他们做饭。我觉得他们是最棒的厨师！
我也喜欢吃这里的蟹粉小笼包，虾肉蒸饺，虾仁蛋炒饭和麻酱面。
下一次我去台北的时候，我还想再去鼎泰豐吃饭！
"当.......时候" C'est une construction et il faut les utiliser ensemble. Ce ne sera pas joli si on supprime les trois mots à la fin même si les Chinois comprennent. 
Je ne sais pas si on utilise "汤填" à Taïwan, mais en Chine continentale, on ne dit jamais ça. On dira plutôt "汤汁", tu sais qu'il existe des différences entre le dialecte Taïwan et celui en Chine continentale. 
En Chine, il existe 8 grande cuisines très célèbrees. Les 8 viennent de 8 provinces différentes, Sichuan, shandong, guadong, jiangsu, zhejiang, fujian, Hunan, anhui.  Chaque région a sa spécialité comme en France. La cuisine chinoise est aussi un art. Dans la tradition de la cuisine chinoise, on trouve que pour les repas, le regard, l'odeur et le goût sont tous vraiment importants. Tous les Chinois sont vraiment fiers de cela surtout pour les Chinois qui sont à l'étrange maintenant, la cuisine chinoise leur manque tellement. 

J'espère que mes améliorations et mes présentations de la cuisine chinoise t'aideront! Et à propos, si j'ai fait des erreurs à l'écrit, est-ce que tu peux les corriger pour moi? Merci beaucoup!!! 

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