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The house for rent [letters for the English practice] 06 June 2016 Dear Madam, I am writing to you to precise the conditions of cheap rent. In fact, I need the house in Brighton. Regrettably, I have to abandon Germany for a long time. And you are able to help me with the first "port" in England. Firstly, I would like to know how cheap rent of your house is. I am a student, therefore I do not have a lot of money. This answer is an essential aspect. Secondly, could you tell me about the setting rules of exploiting your house? I wish to avoid any misunderstandings and conflicts beforehand. Thirdly, I am interested to know what maximum duration you can provide me own house. Mentioned above that I am going to arrive in England for a long term. Generally, I hope that we will not have troubles. I am сoming on the tenth of June. Allow me to know, please, if you are available. I look forward to hearing from you very soon. Yours faithfully, Genrietta Rafteri.

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The house for rent [letters for the English practice]

06 June 2016

Dear Madam,

I am writing to you to precise (weird usage of the word 'precise'; replace with a word like 'finalize') the conditions of cheap rent. In fact, I need the house in Brighton. Regrettably, I have to abandon Germany for a long time.  I am not staying in Germany for a long duration of time. And you are able to help me with the first "port" in England.(Confusing sentence; either omit or change it)

Firstly, I would like to know how cheap the rent of your house is. I am a student, therefore I do not have a lot of money. This answer is an essential aspect. Secondly, could you tell me about the setting rules of exploiting renting your house? I wish to avoid any misunderstandings and conflicts beforehand. Thirdly, I am interested to know what the maximum duration you  can provide would allow me to stay in this apartment. As I mentioned above, my stay in England will be long term. that I am going to arrive in England for a long term.

Generally, I hope that we will not have troubles. I am coming on the tenth of June. Allow me to know, please, if you are available. Please let me know if you are available

I look forward to hearing from you very soon.
Yours faithfully,
Genrietta Rafteri.


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-Gloria

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