Straweberry pie for mom
Today, my mom have come in my home. She doesn't often come.
The 2 june, it was her anniversary. So, we have celebrate that with my girlfriend.
So, I have cooked a strawberry pie. Strawberry pie is a lot love in France. But my mom love every pastry.
She is very greed. (She really like eat pastries)
This my strawberry pie.
What do you think ?
Emmanuel.
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Strawberry pie for mom
Today, my mom have come in came to my home. She doesn't often come.The 2 june, it was her anniversary. So, we have celebrated that with my girlfriend.
So, I have cooked a strawberry pie. Strawberry pie is a lot love enjoyed a lot in France. But my mom loves every all pastries.
She is very greedy. (She really likes to eat pastries)
This is my strawberry pie.
What do you think ?
Emmanuel.
That is a very tasty looking pie! Wow!
Really great English: one thing: do you mean her birthday (son anniversaire) or her marriage anniversary (anniversaire de mariage)?
:)
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Strawberry pie for mom
Today, my mom came to my house. She doesn't often come. (or "She doesn't often visit.")June 2nd was her anniversary (do you mean her birthday?) so we celebrated that with my girlfriend.
So, I have cooked (or I baked) a strawberry pie. Strawberry pie is a lot love loved in France. But my mom loves every pastry.
She is very greedy. (She really likes to eat pastries)
This my strawberry pie.
What do you think ?
Emmanuel.
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