A letter for Mary
Dear Mary,
Knowing that your birthday is drawing near. I come to send you a potted orchid as a gift. Here are some suggestions on how to attend to the plant.
The potted orchid prefers loose soil , which allows water, air and roots to pass through it freely. This flower doesn't need too much water ,so don't water it too often, or it's roots will rot. Cut off the dead leaves in time , especially the ones that have been damaged by worms, or they will affect healthy ones.
I hope you have a nice birthday.
Yours,
LiHua
( 我的这篇小作文你帮忙改一下好吗？十分感谢！)
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A letter to Mary
Dear Mary,
Knowing that your birthday is drawing near. I decided to send you a potted orchid as a gift. Here are some suggestions on how to look after the plant.
Potted orchids prefer (because you are talking about potted orchids generally, not only this specific one) loose soil , which allows water, air and roots to pass through it freely. This flower doesn't need too much water ,so don't water it too often, or it's roots will rot. Cut off the dead leaves promptly, especially the ones that have been damaged by worms, or they will affect the healthy ones.
I hope you have a nice birthday.
Yours,
LiHua
( 我的这篇小作文你帮忙改一下好吗？十分感谢！)
That's really good, loads of quite specific vocabulary in there. The verb "to look after.." is a really useful one to know, I use it all the time in daily life, so be sure to learn it! :) Another way to say the same thing is "to take care of.."
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