Would appreciate if someone could correct my mistakes.
Sitting in a coffee shop pondering about the future. Trying to figure out what i should do in order to have a better life. My future life, status and job have been always one of the biggest priorities in my life. Sometimes thinking too hard about it brings you to mishmash. Sometimes even to frustration.
My name is Aslan Samadzada. I was born and grew up in a small city in Azerbaijan. Having my mom and dad working as doctors, i was constantly asked in my childhood "Sən Etibarın oğlusan?" which means in my native languages "Are you the son of Etibar". That's how my dad is called. I was always felt very proud, but at the same time very pressed. During my childhood i was always told that, i have to avoid certan things. I have to think twice, if i don't want to ruin my dads' reputation. However, after all, it was not a big problem.
I decided to move to another country, when i was 15 years old. Before moving to another country i was very shy person, always felt embarrassed expressing myself even in my native language. I remember my first week in a foreign country, trying to talk to strangers in their native language was twice more embarrassing....
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I would appreciate it if someone could correct my mistakes.
Sitting in a coffee shop pondering about the future, I was trying to figure out what I should do in order to have a better life. My future life, status and job have been always one of the biggest priorities in my life. Sometimes thinking too hard about it brings you to a mishmash. Sometimes even to frustration.My name is Aslan Samadzada. I was born and grew up in a small city in Azerbaijan. As my mom and dad worked as doctors, I was constantly asked during my childhood "Sən Etibarın oğlusan?" which means in my native languages "Are you the son of Etibar". That's what my dad is called. I was always felt very proud (OR: I always felt very proud), but at the same time very pressurised. During my childhood I was always told that, I have to avoid certain things. I had to think twice, if I didn't want to ruin my dads' reputation. However, that was not a big problem.
I decided to move to another country, when I was 15 years old. Before moving to another country I was a very shy person, I had always felt embarrassed expressing myself even in my native language. I remember my first week in a foreign country, trying to talk to strangers in their native language was twice as embarrassing....
That's very good, try not to rely on using 'ing' words too often, I notice you use them more than is necessary! Keep on at it :)
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Would appreciate if someone could correct my mistakes.
I was sitting in a coffee shop pondering about the future, wondering about what i should do to improve my life. My future life, status and job have been always one of the biggest priorities in my life. Sometimes thinking about them too hard brings me to a confusion. Sometimes even to frustration.My name is Aslan Samadzada. I was born and grew up in a small city in Azerbaijan. As both my mom and dad are doctors, I was constantly asking in my childhood "Sən Etibarın oğlusan?" which means "Are you the son of Etibar?". That's my dad's name. I have always felt proud, but at the same time, pressured. When I was younger, I was told to avoid certain things. I have to think twice before doing something, if I didn't want to ruin my dad's' reputation. However, that was not a big problem.
When I was 15, I decided to move to another country. Prior to moving, I was a very shy person. I always felt embarrassed expressing myself, even in my native language. My first week in a foreign country, trying to talk to strangers in their native language was even more embarrassing....
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Would appreciate if someone could correct my mistakes.
Sitting in a coffee shop, I was pondering about the future Trying to figure out what i should do in order to have a better life. My future life, status, and job have been always one of the biggest priorities in my life. Sometimes thinking too hard about it brings you to mishmash and Sometimes even to frustration.My name is Aslan Samadzada. I was born and grew up in a small city in Azerbaijan. Having my mom and dad working as doctors, I was constantly asked in my childhood "Sən Etibarın oğlusan?" which means in my native languages "Are you the son of Etibar". That was my dad's name. I always felt very proud, but at the same time very pressed. During my childhood i was always told that I have to avoid certain things. I have to think twice if I don't want to ruin my dad's reputation. However, after all, it was not a big problem.
I decided to move to another country, when i was 15 years old. Before moving to another country I was a very shy person. I always felt embarrassed expressing myself, even in my native language. I remember my first week in a foreign country, trying to talk to strangers in their native language, and it was twice as embarrassing...
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