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I'm worried about my result. If I want to have a great life, I must try my best to practise language . That's my future. Look at my result of the previous semesters, there will have no recruitments want to accept me. I haveto help myself.

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I'm worried about my results. (Most people  generally talk about "my results" rather than "my result".  To use the singular form,  "my result",  you should be more specific: "I'm worried about my exam result" or "I'm worried about the result of my driving test.")  

If I want to have a great life, I must try my best to practice language. This sounds more natural as "I need to practice [my English/my Spanish/my Chinese] if I want to live the life I want." 

That's my future. Or you could say "That's what my future depends on" or "My future depends on [my results/speaking English well/my language skills]". 

Look at my results from the previous semesters:  there are no recruiters who will accept me. You could also say "When I look at my previous results, I know no- one will want to recruit me. " 

I have to help myself. Or you could say "It's up to me to turn things around" this means that you have to take on the responsibility to improve your language skills. 

Good work! I hope my feedback is helpful (yellow means it was incorrect, blue words are just suggestions for expanding your English skills) Good luck with your language learning. 

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I'm worried about my result.

If I am to have a great life, I must try my best to practice language . That's my future. Look at my result of the previous semesters. There will be no recruiters who want to accept me. I have to help myself.

Very well written!

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I'm worried about my result.

If I want to have a great life, I must try my best to practice the language . That's my future. Look at my results from the previous semesters, there will be no recruitments wanting to accept me. I have to help myself.

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